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for Unlimited Determination

by BeautifulOblivion

person chichirisangel
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Story would be better if,

You removed the (spaced . Yes) words from your sentences. I understand that this might be a problem caused by what word program you used.
There is no need for large gaps between text. Both these problems are both. Annoying. And make a story hard to read.
person Xoburntofferings
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have loved what I have read so far. It always makes my day when a new chapter is up. I love Inu-Yasha fan fiction so anything you can recommend would be awesome!
person xoburntofferings
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am new to your story, but I absolutely love it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person dubs
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOve the story please keep on writing
person Amy
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update?
person FourShotChild
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I rather enjoyed your story. You should add a couple more chapters to fully complete it.
I want to read about Kagome meeting Inuyasha's family. What happened with Sesshomaru? Are
you going to show the wedding? I don't know. There are just so many things that need
answers. Also, you have Kagome being proposed to twice.... I actually sat down and read this
entire delight in one sitting. I hope you update soon! Thanks!
person Nile
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this start with Kagome meeting Kouga once again by chance.
person Nile
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! Sesshoumaru surfaces too! He is a real jackass. Poor Kagome in the middle.
person Nile
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru is really messed up in this one. Probably a bit more obsessed than Kouga and Kouga is harmless...lol
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
heheheh YAY u updated!!! :) that makes me very happy !! .. hmm who is her watcher... i have a guess but im not going to say it outloud incase im wrong lol but other then that YAY!!! awsome job n i cant wait for the next chappy!! :)

your horribly obssesed
SinfulSammi

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