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for Do you know how to Dance?

by sugar0o

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know your good at leaving me hangin' right?? Your story is soooo good!! But I HATE when you keep leaving me haning like that!! I hope you update soon ,and get them to that club pronto!! (lol silly me)But your story reminds me of that new Usher song 'Love In This Club' ,hn.But anyway post soon,cause I just Love this story.
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice nice nice! Plaes add more soon!!~
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's Obsidian here!
I like this story, it's very interesting. Though, you do have some grammar problems, it's nothing too big. I'd say keep up the good work!

XOXO
<3
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, the plot thickens ^_^ Great job, thank you for giving me something to read!
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i was so into this story at only two chapters that i was shocked when i came to the end, please hurry and update it soon. i have to find out what happens.
person Panchat
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! exelent chapter! pleaassseeee keep it up!
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW I want more please update constently please!!!!!!!


I really Want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter .I like it a lot .I hope they dance soon .And how does Kikiyo or Inuyasha knows that Kagome would go dancing with Sesshoumaru??I wonder.But other than that I love it so far.I hope you write more!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting story I would like to see where it leads too. Thanks for posting
person emmaren
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the whole "chew toy" thing. I think that there should be catagory for best insult/nickname. I cannot stop laughing at it. I love this story. Please update soon.

Emily

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