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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow I seen your story on fan fiction and adult fan fiction but because I was reading a story already I did not get to read it, boy am I glad I went back and read it after I was done. Your story is really get so far and I don’t say that often to people’s stories hell I hardly review stories unless they are really great and your story is one of them. Like how they got revenge on them(inuyasha and kikyou) it was beautiful and i could not have came up with a better idea, the sex between them is hot and powerful and I like that you are putting it out there that inuyasha’ s mother should not be acting like they own her something because she is the other woman and did break there home apart. I also wonder how sesshoumaru's mothers going to act when she see kagome. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen please update your story soon. Sorry to tell you when you should update I know most writers hate that but I cant help wanting to read a new chapter soon

This is a great story. Can't wait to read more. Rate 5.

Butterfly Beauty

Just greaat.

Butterfly Beauty

I love chapter two!
You are great, the complexity of the characters are well done. They are so realistic.

Butterfly Beauty

Chapter three is awesome.

Butterfly Beauty

Chapter four is wonderful.

Butterfly Beauty

hi, great story I can't wait to read what happens next. Amazing job.

I enjoyed the detail in this chapter. I understnad how hard it is to divert at times fromt he man characters and try to tie up and elaborate on other supporting characters bu i think you did a fine job. I am going to take your advice and i have started another short flic which has relieved some of the tension from stick to the plan. though my mind chibis still buzz in my head about the next chapter it is allowing me to focus. So thanks for the advise!

Thanks for another great chapter! Good story and I can't wait for Kagome to meet her new in-laws. :-) I can't tell who she will get along with and who she will clash with, but I am suspecting that Sesshomaru's mother will be the one who likes her most after she gets to know her.