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Amazing!! Bravo!! Hot as lava!! An update to remember!

I don't know how else to describe it, but it was absolutely beyond words! Not only the whole fashion show, but every little detail!

I love how the girls were practically drooling over the guys, and how they chose to put themselves out there for the show!! Just perfect! It was really well done and I enjoyed it very much!

Onto the lemon: Mmmmm, Mmmmmmm!!! Nothing as sexy as a hot Sesshomaru to make the blood boil! That citrus goodness had me panting for a few minutes! He is absolutely divine!

Lady,you have a way with words!! Loved to see you updating and look forward to the next chapter with much anticipation!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

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MidCat

I must say, I love this story I have only found a few that really catch the attention of the reader and keep them there. The only thing I am wondering about is: why does everyone have a problem with Kara and Sesshoumaru, and not with Inuyasha and Kara? they all lived in the same house together as siblings right? Maybe I'm missing something, but keep up the good work, I know you don't update often but I'll be here when you post the next one!

Wow!! Just stumbled upon this story and I think is amazing!! Great story plot and character development!! I am dying to find out what happens next and really look forward to your next update! Is there a mailing list or a way to find out about the next time you update? I don't want to miss your updates and would really like to know how to find your story again! If you can help me I would really appreciate it very much!! Thank you in advance and thank you for writing and sharing!

I like the new chapter. I started to think you forgot about the story. Part of me wants Inuyasha to be the father because of all the drama that would cause. Another parts wants Sesshoumaru to be the fater. I still want Sesshoumaru to tell his fater how much of an ass he his been to Sesshoumaru.

I think the story so far is great. I like your OC, Kara. I think for the next chapter you should have Yuki take the test to see who the father is. I also think it would be great if Sesshoumaru told his dad off about being betrayed and I mean with venom. He did same thing to Sesshoumaru mother and now he wants to act so hurt. Plus he never apology to Sesshoumaru and his mother. He also want Sesshoumaura to act all family like with Izayoi; I would have hated the woman my dad cheated on my mother with too. He also did not ask Sesshoumaru how he was helding the facts that he walked out on him and his mother, that his mother killed herself, and that he cheat on his mother. I also think that the whole family needs to be present when Sesshoumaru tells him off. Sesshoumaru should also tell Izayoi that he did hate her but he does not any more but she would never be a mother to him and that if his father would not have cheated on his mother but divorced her that maybe they could have been friends and he would not have hate Inuyasha simply because he was there son.

I love this story of yours. It's beautiful and heartfelt. I wanted to read your work, since you were so kind to read mine. I also went and checked out the work of SesshMate. I found that you and her have met and all and noticed that you give her, her props and couldnt help but to notice the similar attributes in writing style that you both share. 5 stars, miss. Keep it up and once again, thank you


Darkest Regards,
BlackMaiden

btw, I just remembered. I have a character named Kara in the works of one of my stories. She is a cocubine of Inutaisho before his death, as well as the first human I have lay with Sesshomaru. Ironic, neh?

BlackMaiden

Well then I would like Ideas... email me at ashleyroberts@comcast.net if you know mikoscrib tell her my email, I'm not full of Ideas like you'd think...

Man I love you story and can not and I can bnot wait to read more so please finish it. Please let Kara kick the living shit out of Kagome. I would never do that to my bestfriend. Hell not even to someone I know as well.Inuyasha needs to get his to but justthe fact of him knowing the child is not his and Kara and Sesshomaru were together is good revenage. Man I hope you finish and I hope Sesshomaru let Kara have it for leaveing him. I still like them together good match.

Another great chapter! I'm sure Kara and Sess will work things out. I have to have faith in Sess's awesomeness that he won't let Kags seduce him...I loved the scene where he holds his daughter for the first time. It was sweet. I didn't think the attraction came on too strong. I mean it's clear that she never fell out of love with himm in the first place. I'm glad Sess is having the same difficulty. But knowing both Kara's and Sess's stubbornness it may take awhile for either of them to admit their feelings. I can't wait till the next chapter!