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for New Beginnings

by salomewilde

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nick pick first before anything else. The word you want is 'hanyou', not 'hanyo'.

As for the series itself...,I like it.

If you skip to the morning after this Mewtwo will be furious. This Mewtwo shall wait on the next chapter
person amadoni
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"So…shall I skip the lemon and begin the next chapter in the morning, my friends? //grin//."
Does money grow on trees? Do you really need to ask? Update soon.
person adeaneri
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was great. cacnt wait for the next chapter. DONT SKIP THE LEMON.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no they need the lemon, or is it us that need it. lol lol up-date soon.
person New Fan
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will be trouble in paradise? Great chapter, update soon.
person orvida
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well thus far i like this story and i can't wait for your lemon post to go up.
person nchsmi
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous segment to your great series! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, yes! Please do the one-shot! I'm interested to know what the Mokomoko sama is for as well!

B reading U!
L8r!
person Amadoni
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've been loving your series of Sesshoumaru/Rin stories. I'm glad that you're continuing these as well. I eagerly wait for your next update. Ja ne
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok than, now let's see what happens.