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for New Beginnings

by salomewilde

person Bubblez
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
JUST WANTED TO SAY i LOVE YOUR STORiES AND WAS WONDERiNG WHEN YOUR GOiNG TO PUT A NEW CHAPTER UP???
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7 is missing and chapter 8 has been uploaded twice. I beg of you please remedy this. Otherwise tis story of yours is excellent and needs an update ASAP.
P.S.: I wonder whether Sesshoumaru will now allow Rin to bear his child, even if it is a hanyou. an then where the heck is Sango?
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaawwwwwwww
person Lamica
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o,O Oy! Wheres the rest? ;p I sure hope you update soon, Ive been content in reading all of your sesshomaru/rin arcs. Keep up the fantastic work! =D
person Niiro
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Bows deeply* FORGIVE ME!! I should have reviewed much sooner, especially since I read this chapter sometime last week!!! My computer still isn't much better. I can't access my Hotmail e-mail account, and can only read my Yahoo e-mails(but not reply). I'm so sorry I took this long to review! So much has happened...

Enough of my complaining and whining. This chapter is from Jaken's perspective. That's new. Most people write him as a bumbling idiot who isn't very observant, but I like your Jaken better. I always vision him much taller than he is, I don't know why. Isn't he about Shippo's height? lol, Anyhow, no Rin in this chapter...but I suppose that's to be expected now that the trio is split up(hopefully to be reunited soon).

I'm much more interested in that broken sword now! It affects Sesshoumaru but not Jaken...hm...I wonder, maybe it only affects Inu-youkai? Or maybe it just affects Sesshoumaru....

Either way, I'm anxiously awaiting another chapter!! I'll be starting my summer term soon, but I chose all morning classes so I have a lot of free time to read!! Do update soon! I'm waiting!!

-Niiro
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling that sword had something to do with it. Looks like Sess will never learn what his father was trying to teach him. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude what kind of sword is this? I wanna know what it does and if it had something to do with Sesshomaru attacking Rin. Hmmm... Loving the story. Update soon! ^_^
person adeaneri
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so the chapter was short and dammit i needed more than that are you going to makke me wait a long time for the reat. and whats up with that sword. crap man give me some more. NEEEEEEDDD MORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE! AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

ahem. sorry boutthat temporay insanity. but seriouly more please.
person Niiro
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such angst! I know I said I was looking forward to more angst but I feel for Rin. That doesn't change how much I love this! I can' t get enough!!

On a sadder note, my computer is acting weird! Its going really slow, wont let me check my email, and freezes!! Hence why I wasn't able to read and review you're wonderful chapters! Im on the PSP's internet...which has limited memory.

I'll try to email you soon! Again, great chapters! I'll be checking back-to-back for more!!
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let's see how they get through this.