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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O....If I knew you could die and still write; I'd kill you! ARGH~!!! Naraku was lying, Sesshomaru wasn't the cocktease YOU ARE!!! Grrr...! Evil authors...why are all the really good authors evil!? Always wiggling the next chapter infront of us poor readers just to pull it away untill later, grrr...*sigh* cliffys, evil author go hand & hand. Well, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
~Miss War-chan
~Miss War-chan
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well first off let me just apologize for my last review. I feel like you took it the wrong way so before the actual review I just want to explain. I did say that Sesshoumaru seemed very OOC, BUT for this story it really works. I really enjoy reading it and very now and then I do see the Sesshoumaru that is the regal lord come out and I love that. I love how you are portraying him in your story, it is really good. I know he has a background and it's not cute, and again I just want to say that I know that and I ENJOY that! lol, I love the OOCness with Sesshoumaru right now, and I just want more of him!!! ^o^ *glomps*
Now for the other part, I know what you mean. I did read your other authors note, but can't I be an annoying reviewer and just want it all? Longer chapters with more updates? Lol! But I was being very narrow minded and didn't see the pluses of having shorter chapters. It equals out to be the same and it keeps us on our toes. Your chapters are I guess you would say medium length and I now respect your decision to make them that way. Again I'm sorry for my last review. Hope this kinda clears some things up? ^.^'
Now! For the rest! I'm dying to know what kind of role you have planned for Inuyasha, because I keep seeing his name pop up everywhere. Are you planning on throwing him in there to add a twist to the story? I'm excited to find out. Kouga, at first I thought he was going to be after Sesshoumaru, and I still have my eye on him and can't wait to see how he also plays a role in this story.
On another note, Sesshoumaru and Naraku, ah the joys of this pairing. Loved the scene, and I'm on edge trying to figure out what Naraku is going to do. Will he stop thinking that it's to soon, or will Sesshoumaru stop him? If he doesn't stop himself, what will Sesshoumaru do since he seems not to sure of himself, if the mating happens? Anyways I'm sure the next chapter and many more to come will answer my many questions and so much more. Good write, and I also have a good feeling about this story! I'm excited to see just what you are going to do with it. Until then keep up the good job!
Now for the other part, I know what you mean. I did read your other authors note, but can't I be an annoying reviewer and just want it all? Longer chapters with more updates? Lol! But I was being very narrow minded and didn't see the pluses of having shorter chapters. It equals out to be the same and it keeps us on our toes. Your chapters are I guess you would say medium length and I now respect your decision to make them that way. Again I'm sorry for my last review. Hope this kinda clears some things up? ^.^'
Now! For the rest! I'm dying to know what kind of role you have planned for Inuyasha, because I keep seeing his name pop up everywhere. Are you planning on throwing him in there to add a twist to the story? I'm excited to find out. Kouga, at first I thought he was going to be after Sesshoumaru, and I still have my eye on him and can't wait to see how he also plays a role in this story.
On another note, Sesshoumaru and Naraku, ah the joys of this pairing. Loved the scene, and I'm on edge trying to figure out what Naraku is going to do. Will he stop thinking that it's to soon, or will Sesshoumaru stop him? If he doesn't stop himself, what will Sesshoumaru do since he seems not to sure of himself, if the mating happens? Anyways I'm sure the next chapter and many more to come will answer my many questions and so much more. Good write, and I also have a good feeling about this story! I'm excited to see just what you are going to do with it. Until then keep up the good job!
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could you end it like that, just when it was getting really hot and heavy. I look forward to your next update!!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every interesting story so far. Sesshoumaru seems to be very OOC but thats okay it seems to work for this story. The only thing that I wish you'd do is make the chapters a tad bit longer, if not then there isn't anything wrong with that. I'm a fan of the story either way and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Can't always say that I will review but I'll do my damn-est to try. lol. Good work and keep it up! Hope the next chapter is just a good as the others. ^-^
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i love it ^^ update please
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this couple they're so hot together please update soon
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!