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well...i like abotto and the interaction between him+inu are really nice, and the hateful villagers hellbent to kill inu are realistic, but....*gulp!*....there are also major plotholes. like how/why naraku is still alive, what´s with the jewell, why did he bothered to kill kaede? plus i think that inu get over his friends death WAY too quick - i mean, befriending the guy, ok, but bedding him so soon? you could have put a few weeks traveling together in between...and the end is no real end at all. sorry!

omg you tease!!!! you give me sweet, cute, sexiness then you rip it away with evil, hopelessness, and rape then you give me and bit of hope that they will be happy and take it away!!!!!! ;__;

but i really do love your story!!! I am just really into it! XD i think thats its cute that you got overly excited while rereading it yourself!

omg i wanna read the squeal really bad! hmmm.... will their be ghost sex! XD what he said he wouldn't leave him after he died!

omg i feel sooo bad for inuyasha though he is finally starting to feel better and he finds love then it is ripped from him and he is then abused and then is left alone again even more broken then before! i also liked Abotto whhhyyy he have to die?!?! ;__;

i am really wondering where you will take it from here though! i hope i can read it soon! ^_^

Omg... That was a horrible ending. Lol. I probably shouldn't have read this when I was tired. Well it was really good though. The beginning of this one was so sweet though, I liked it a lot. Sorry I didn't read it sooner though, I wanted to read it all the way through without stopping so I had to make sure I wasn't doing anything else. Hope to read more of your work soon.

How dare you kill him? He was too good to died everyone around inuyasha has died you could hae given him this one why not give him this? It's funny as i was reading this i felt like i was the one going through it. I cried at parts, laugh at other, and even aroused at parts. You make the story seem so real and i love that keep it up

Ok... I will read the sequel, but only if you let InuYasha have some peace of mind. I loved that he and Abotto were happy and in love. I thought the love-making sequence was beautifully written- very poetic, even. But then you immediately brought in Naraku. Ok. I can handle that, but to have him rape InuYasha merely minutes, or a couple of hours after the love-making sequence. That was mean! I knew Abotto would get killed, just didn't imagine it this way or so soon. Was hoping it would be something more common, like old age or measles- anything but Naraku! Still, you wrote a great story, and yes, I wanted to cry. Oh well, there's always the sequel.

As a side note- glad you like the Kouga x Bankotsu stories.. They're specially written with you in mind!

DLS

awwww they are all cute and snuggle with each other!! ^__^

damn those humans for hurting him but they are now dead for the stupidity! soooo HA evil humans you cant mess with sexiness!!!! XD

i like this chapter they keep comforting each other and are starting to flirt the humans just keep ruining their moments but they are gone now!

ha ha i am glad that my weirdness makes you giggle! i hope you update soon i wanna see more!!! X3

Wow interesting...love that can be healing him...i am glad Inuyasha is going to be healing with love...It is a very cute story..hehe...i like it very much :D *_* keep reading you *_*

Omg, so I take it back, Abotto is NOT a robot... did you torture him enough? Lol. That poor kid... The story is really good though! I like the story line. I was totally embarrassed when he lifted up Inuyasha's shirt and said "sexy" That was funny. And how you had the dream mix with reality was perfect, though I can't believe Inuyasha was dense enough not to wake up... So are the villagers all dead now hopefully..?

I hope to see more posted soon!

XXOO, Alex.

I knew those villagers were up to no good, and I could see the fire starting, too. That dream was a prediction of that. What I am most curious about is Abotto's ability to heal so quickly. Guess we can find out about that later. and YAY lemon coming!!!!! DLS

it is cute! i still feel bad for inuyasha but i glad that he has someone now! I really liked this chapter it was really good!!!! i like how they are comforting each other!! X3

nooo evil lil human children!!! >_<

i cant wait to see what happens next i hope that the evil humans dun get em!!! >_>