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omg is kagome pregant or something?that would be a good conversation talking resason.

Ahh, there in the same mansion!!! This is soooo nerve racking!!! I love it!! So glad you decided to continue on with this!! Please up-date again as soon as possible!! I have to read what happens next!!!

I just read the first one and now this bit of a sequel. I love them. It was interesting and had the ability to draw me in and before I knew it, I had read all that was there. Well, take care.

I am sooo happy you decided to continue this! I ABSOLUTELY loved it as a one-shot and I'm sure I will love it even more as an actually story! Keep up the good work!

OMG you are a great author I don’t know how you do it. I was hanging onto your every word. I don’t even think I can think of a story that I like as much as this. You should make this story have many more chapters so that I have something to do with my time. I have already read this story over 4 times and I’m going to recommend it to several of my friends. Have you ever considered taking your original one-shot and combining it with the sequel along with adding more to the story in the beginning and adding more detail, changing the characters names and making this a real novel? I would bye it in a heart flash. Please update very soon because I am so anxious to read the next chapter I don’t think I’m going to get any sleep until I find out what is going to happen with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Please Please update soon my sleep depends on it.


wow i dont think i have ever wrote this much in a review O.o

FIRST!, thanks for sequel!!! and i love how you set up your story.. and how long and detailed it is. not just one sentence then a huge space, and another sentece. i cant wait to see what happenes next! citrus next chapter? so im guessing sess/kag meet up face to face..or dont tell me....inu/kag. NEVER right? ahah, update soon!

*squeel* HOORAY FOR CONTINUATIONS!!!!!! *clears throat* Well now that all taht is out of the way...

I'm very happy as you can see that you've decided to keep this story going. The question is.. How long can we encourage you to go with it? Hopefully more chapters and more SMUUUUUUUUT.

Uh oh Sess is not a very happy demon right now. Honestly, I skipped through half the chapter because I was so impatiant about him finding Kags there. Question: So if Yash is in love with her then... why hasn't he tried to ya know go with something there. Maybe that question was answered and I just didn't realize it.

Once again just wanted to say how beautiful your writing is. I'm really looking forward to more chappies *cough* SMUT *cough*

yes, yes, yes soooooooo glad you wrote this coolies. please up date soon please

heh, does e really think kagome capable of something so cruel? XD theire diging their own graves becose of their damn pride and stubborness!
God someone tape them together lol

that thing with kouga and kag's .. pssh.. i wish that was how my exboyfriends were... GAH!! but i digress.. this is AWESOME!!

i loved sessh mental breakdown.. it was soo true, and flustering.. towards the end i was like.. he has to know he has to know.,.. and BLAME! he found out.. yay!! i cant wait for more..

and as a side note, good thing ur taking a break on swtpft, cause u never wanna force perfection!! lol! not saying anything in a neg.. just want it to flow out.. cause u can tell when people just try to chug crap out and it makes no sense.. and its like 2 pages of slop! ok..

YAY!! more!! and sweet on the citrus.. lol!