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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello to the both of you! I'm truly enjoying this fic so far. The chapter flows very beautifully. I love the way the chapter reads. It's very well written. The grammar and spellng are great and the detailing is superb. Bad grammar, spelling, and punctutation are something I have a pet peeve about. Nothing annoys me more than piss poor writing. I love Inuyahsa AU fics. They're usually the ones that are the most entertaining.
It would appear that Kags and Yash did not have a great first meeting. That's ok though more angst = better smut! I'm looking forward to more chapters. I hope you update soon!
I really wish I could have left a better review, but it looks like everything is perfect so far and it's only been one chapter. Maybe by the next one I'll have more information about the characters and it's story.
It would appear that Kags and Yash did not have a great first meeting. That's ok though more angst = better smut! I'm looking forward to more chapters. I hope you update soon!
I really wish I could have left a better review, but it looks like everything is perfect so far and it's only been one chapter. Maybe by the next one I'll have more information about the characters and it's story.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this looks interesting. I hope you continue it.