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for Yellow Brick Road

by emmaren

schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, i love how kagome keeps referring to the wizard of oz. please let me know when you update my email is loretta_boshell@hotmail.com
person katme
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loves this story to the bone! It is all wonderful and fantastical! I am always on edge waiting for the next chapter so I want you to understand that I mean it when I say I appreciate you work.
person oneswish
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another update.. and an even deeper chapter. it does seem fitting for her to tell the trueth to miroku, good job. u give kags some peace of mind.. and ur lemon was very 'business like'. which would make sense, i think.. but i like how he didnt want to, but had to .. for well yah know... but it was a very good job.. even ur first one.. but than again that one is a different subject on lemon esk ness..

but all in all.. u are great.. and ur tone in ur story is very different, i find it very addicting.. lol!!

YAY!! more oz please.. thats all i want.. OZ!!
THANKYOU!!
higan
person sugar0o
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well hot damn you've left me crazed and slightly emotional, in a good and intrigued way. This is such a wonderful story. its so dark and bright at the same time, and i LOVE the Wizard of Oz references. Even more the fact that even in all this darkness Kagome can see the light. its wonderful and i adore you for continuing to write it! please never give up the multi layers and facets of this splendid story! - r0o
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man...Kagome is really losing it. She could give a good therapist a run for his money. It was disturbing to realize Kagome's pup was to be used for evil purposes. Poor Kagome. She just can't get a break. And Sesshomaru's such a damned ass that I can't even wish for her to be saved by him. Miroku gives pervert a whole new meaning in this one. Can we say pedophile? haha! The best part was Kagome dousing the old bitch in hot water. It would have been too easy if she melted, but oh so satisfying. Nice job. This story is definitly unique. Until next time~

~Rin
person sugar0o
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
didnt melt her, hahahahaha thats freaking great. lmao. yanno i was expecting Kags to do something akin to crazy, dousing her with water, was not one of them. And i'm so glad that Inu finally realized it was a movie, though i must say i do wonder if Kags will be able to "cleanse" her pup, the kami's did so much to break her to make her prefect for sacrificing herself, they broke her so much, i hope she has enough to be able to do it, it'll be sad If Sess has to kill the pup. because i REALLY dont think even a broken Kags will let him do that. This story is amazing, and i hope its doing some kinda better on the other site as far as reviews go, i know i didn't see many but maybe the the hits are making up for it. - r0o
person oneswish
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a twist!

that was soo different.. miroku and rin?? different.. but superising.. cool!! i wish u would have her explain the story to someone.. the snipits need MORE.. lol!! but its written as every chapter perfectly.. dont take soo long!! just kidding.. dont rush either.. but it was a great chapter this time.. im shocked the way u portrayed sango, very very different from what other people do.. but i like it. makes the reader think. so that other fox kit, what is his past like?

THANKYOU!!
higan
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry I haven't had the chance to review sooner then this cuz I've been reading this for awhile! But I am making sure to let you know how much I'm loving this story! I'm always happy when i see you've updated! I love the fact that this isn't your everyday sess/kag fic. It's refreshing to find something new and creative with a touch of darkness to it. I must say i am very impressed and am never disappointed with your chapters. Keep up the great work, Your very talented. ^_^

schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where you are going with this. Keep up the good work, and I will keep my eye open for your next update! Take care.
person sugar0o
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am in shock, this story is possibly one of the betters i have ever read, and it think hat many since i have at least 100 or more that i watch and wait for on one site and at least 30 or more on this one, for this to have so few reviews are watches alarms me. This is such an amazing story if i knew where i could put you up for an award i would its so very VERY unique and amazing, and i honestly just want to sing your praise its a wonderful story. i for one am going to post your story, a link to let me say on the front page of my other site, i think you should up load on ff . net as well. M for story content mind you. but OMG maybe you''ll get a better reply and feel for your story, i hope that the lack of reviews and viewers doesn't deter you bc i'd be very upset if this Dorthy didn't find her way home. i love you play on the wizard of Oz as well, its possibly the most original something i've come across in a while, and the characters are so very in character. its for lack of any way better to say it, amazing. damn good job. - r0o