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This is an awesome story. I'm sorry you haven't been getting enough reviews, but I just wanted to let you know that you have a kick ass imagination and this story is breath-taking. I absolutely love it. Please, update when you can. I can't wait for the next couple of chapters. It iritates me that Kagome doesn't understand Sesshomaru, but also vice versa. She's human and he's a dog demon. But finally -FINALLY!!- someone can bend to understand the other. Its kind of relieving now.

my goodness i have no idea what you did to become so talented, but honestly this chapter has my heart breaking and rebuilding with joy, i know that in all this Kagome has to be broken down to almost nothing, shards of a jewel that was once her beautiful soul. but at the same time i see the pace you set, and the slight hints here and there, and i can see that your going to make it better and brighter in the end then it ever could have been before. I have no idea how much you'll taunt us with heart breakingly sad moments or how many comical moments of laughter you'll allow us, or even how much smooth joy you'll set in the wake of this story, but i know i'll be there for every chapter from 1 to the end, fantastic job! and if you don't do this for a living, maybe you should look into finding a publisher and see what the world thinks of a work thats all you. I'd buy it. this made me happy. :) Yours, - r0o

Whoa. I had a few chapters to catch up on. Loved the chapters. I hope to see a new one soon.

Still one of my favorite stories! ^_^ You're doing great

holly hannah! you know i love it. how to tell you how much with out gushing is the hard part. I adore your story, there aren't enough ways to tell you how much i love the fact that you actually make me think about what your writing before i get to enjoy it, the possibilities and the conundrums are fantastic, stunning even. and i cant help but find the random yet completely well placed bits from Oz ever so perfect. I cant tell you why there aren't reviews, or why there aren't hits, but i can tell you they are sorely missing out. and i hope that if nothing else this one reviewer is at least enough to tell you its beautiful and a magical way. always your reviewer - r0o

ps. don't worry Dorthy everything will be fine.

Sorry for not reviewing much if any, you could take the lack of reviews as a nothing's wrong so I don't need to review type thing. I've been enjoying it although I was sad about Shippou dying.

I have recently began reading your story and I must say it is very good. It is very dramatic and very sad. I am getting the instinct impression they need to get Kagome to believe in herself again. I believe that her character is way too angsty. I do see why she is, considering the circumstances you have built up around her. It is appropriate for the story. However, somewhere in all of this, Sesho needs to actually show her love, make her feel like she is needed and loved. She has lost that somewhere along the way. She lost everything she has ever loved...her mother, her brother, her grandfather, her friends...Sango, Shippo...She feels like she had failed them all. But she hasn't...She is blind to the fact that she has a new love waiting right there for her to take hold of...He may have taken her purity, but he really did have the best of intensions when he did what he did to her. I believe Sesho is in love with her and he needs to come to that reality and tell her...as a confession if you will. She needs to feel the love he has for her and out of that love will come the strenght for her to fight for her pup and the danger that lurks around it. The sooner Kagome and Sesh come together, the sooner they can prepare for the dangerous battle ahead and hopefully a happy ending. And maybe she may never be able to go home like dorothy did, but she has a new home...one that is waiting for her somewhere over the rainbow...with her pup, Sesh, Miroku and Rin and even Inuyasha. Now that would be a happy ending. Great Job I look forward to your next update.

since i don't want you to pop a vein i have to write a review this time...i do enjoy reading this story...the darkness...the lunacy and the cultural protocol... i hope kags will get her fire and optimism back... live without fear! pls. update soon.

lmao, nah its cool. I actually got it because of my own dog, 'Bert', the only thing he plays with are Chew toys, squeaky toys. He's so possessive, until you give him something new. any ole hoot.

My dear Emily, your story again, is fantastic, in its many facets of both myth and lore, i find myself completely blindly and happily lost in your woven tale. i of coarse cannot wait until you never chapter, because well its just amazing really, i find myself so very pulled into your story, i'm memorized. I hope that if anyone reads reviews before reading the story they will know that this is fantastic! as always - r0o

Another great chapter! I must say you've got me hooked on your story... ^_^