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so who is sess's niece going to end up with? and poor inuyasha is alone as welll. i really like this story, it is going to have a hapy ending right?

I have been reading your story and I really am enjoying it very much. I have been out of touch for a short while and was tickled to see that you had updated several chapters since I read last. I have just spent a couple of really pleasurable hours catching up, so thank you! I read that some of your readers were not happy with your 'weak' version of Kagome. Well, at first I thought the same thing. Of course, my patience proved itself again, because I eventually came to see that she is not weak at all, but stronger. Admittedly, her mind is a little wishy-washy at times, but her resolve to do the right thing is powerful. I commend you on sticking to the youkai-alpha-animal background of Sesshomaru. I think it is marvelous how you bring to life his inhumanity. It is very hard to see Kagome bend to him in so many ways and I want to scream at him for treating her the way he does, BUT I do understand it. Being a modern woman raised on modern values, it is hard to accept the demure, docile life of a woman from the feudal era. This does not mean that it was not the way of things and you are doing well in portraying that. Overall, I can say that you have a wonderful imagination and a beautiful way with words. This is one of the most unique stories that I have ever read. Congrat's on the nominations at A Single Spark. You deserved them and I wish you luck in the polls.

~Rin

Great Chapter and a Beautiful ending to it as well. I love the transition in this story, every chapter has a purpose and a meaning. You have definitely thought this story through and I wait in anticipation to read your next chapter. Great Work, Please update soon...well as soon as you can.

Nice chapter! Kagome is finally relaxing around Sesshomaru and he is finally seeing a step beyond his arrogance thanks to Inuyasha. I think this trip into the wilderness will prove interesting for them both. I look forward to seeing what you have cooked up for Oda Nobunaga. He is also a key character in my story Violation of Honor. I found a great site that you can reference - if you are interested. It has dozens of links to different facts related to Nobunaga and his reign. I found it very interesting. Especially discovering that the man was supposedly very handsome, though quite short. He hated his wife and loved a concubine. He was a brilliant strategist, but considered cruel. Anyway, here is the link: http://uk.geocities.com/rainforestwind/oda14.htm#catholic

Thanks for the update!
~Rin

I love your story!!! It's sooooo good, especially the references to the wizard of oz. i love that movie. well i hope to see a chapte again soon!

I.S.

Getting better and better! ^_^

I would like to commend you on a job well done. If you got the impression from my last review that I thought Kagome was weak that was not my intention. I was merely trying to point out that even the strongst person has their weak moments. It is those weak moments that make us stronger, especially when there is someone who loves them desperately trying...begging them to allow their help. I believe you have tapped into what every human should know in their lifetime...it that nothing can be force and time is the healing of ALL wounds as long as trust is present. Your story is by far the best I've read in a while. This story would be great with or without the addition of a lemon. If you decided to change the character names and publish this story...I would definitely put it in my library of works. Incredible job. Oh and trust your judgment on the lemon, but if you still feel the need for assistance, try and contact some of the authors whose works you enjoy reading and ask for their advice. Better yet, if you have beta, ask her/he...I'm sure they have written a few...or at least corrected and proofread a few. Again, great job and I look forward to your next incredible update.

well hot damn that was fantastic, poor inu and the throw up. but other wise thats rather cool, and she's having full youkai twins. neat! i always love this story. ^_^

as far as assisting with lemons i would say search out Keva, she makes some of the greatest lemons ever. Elle6778, makes some that are fantastic as well. ^_^
-r0o

wow, that was really informative. i really liked this chapter, and i love that this new female, Michi, is explaining things to Kagome, i must admit that i'm still a tad bit pissed with Rin. I know the point i really do but i kinda just wish that someone else besides Inu, who is no longer the primary being in her life, knew just what kinda hell she's going through. i think of all the characters in this thus far he's probably the closest to understanding her, beyond the Oz, beyond everything. He knows how hard it is for her to just give in to this, though i do understand the need for it, and your flow is fantastic. I just wish there was more understanding there then she's getting. i want her to be able to find peace, and home, but at the same time maybe putting aside what she knows and what is to come, and how to act, she can find some measure of home in a sea of difference. though when we get there, i kinda hope we see everyone else like o crap kags makes scene! either way, love this. you know it! i think i'm just babbling. still love it.
- r0o

this is good, i hope sesshomaru takes care of his mother soon. i really like this story, thank you for updating it regularly and sending emails when you do.