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for Yellow Brick Road

by emmaren

person sugar0o
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O wonderful, theres no way to tell you how wonderful this was, and i course i cant wait for more, fantastic job. - r0o
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter!

will the relationship between kag and sess be "formalized" (don't know if it's really the word in english) ? I mean will he finally mark her soon? will finally sesshomaru's mother be stop and give what she truelly deserved?

i can't wait to read more! please please update as soon as you can!
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your chapter... but i am slightly confused, who is the tin man? and who is the lion? i have a guess but i'm not sure. well i hope that all is going well with the next chapters and i can't wait to see them! ta ta for now~

I.S.
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I do have a question though, Is Kagome ever going to tell the the meaning for what the think is crazy talk? well untill next time
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I am glad that you updated! it makes me warm and fuzzy inside! lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. please continue!
person sugar0o
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! i do believe that chapter just gave me the vappers. HOLY MAN ALIVE that was "climatic" -nods- i must tell you, that you made a brown woman blush :p Of coarse it was well written i wouldn't think you could put anything out that wasn't well written. I love the little joke about the wiggling brow as well very thoughtful and made me giggle. Life happens, just come back to us. we adore you. hope all is well *hugs* - r0o
person kristin
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about what u said before about the ah smut.i like the fact that you would want to have that kind of bond between them.most authors just put that in there cuase they know the people usually like that kind of stuff.but i think its cool how u want to write ur story like that.much thanks for ur cool stories.
person venus
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great fic
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
at first i did not want to read this story until my fav author recomindd it in on of their storys. this story is wonderful i love it so much. it is now one of my fav storys. please keep up the good work and update soon.
person sugar0o
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
raRr! that chapter was wonderful and your title had me giggling honestly. that was such a realistic answer, and i love that kags and Sess finally have had a wonderful talk. i like how you fixed the issue with Sess and the fidelity. i love that you've got yourself one horny ankle-biter, and that he's still being wonderful enough not to force her. this is just amazing, and i cant wait for more - r0o