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for Yellow Brick Road

by emmaren

person mrs sesshy
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for this wonderful chappie...I wasn't sure if I want to cry or jump Yasha...he's so grown up, I almost bared my neck...hehe loved how Michi finally disposed the wicked witch and hurray for Sess-sama, coming to the rescue...my hero! And I can almost imagine how much in pain Kags were...no epidural???My heart goes with you and the twins...I really love this story!
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NANI!! It can't end!!! I like this story too much!! WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! Oh well, I guess all things eventually come to an end... well I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon please!!!
Ja Ne
Infinite Silence
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!!! And yay the bitch is dead!!! ^_^
person Lena
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cheers and standing ovation from crowd* WOW this story is GREAT I can never wait for the next chapter to come out, but this one was well worth the wait. I LOVE this story it is one of my favorites. I going to be sad when it ends *tears*. Keep up the great work update soon. Truthfully, if I wore a hat it would be off and I would bow, but since I don't wear hats I'll just bow. *BOWS* Can't wait for the next one.
person sugar0o
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yEy you updated! i cant tell you how much i love this story, it made since, all of it, and no one i think could fault you for everything that's happened, its been wonderful, i am surprised that it was two girls. not a bad thing, but doesn't a breeder have the right to keep her post until she births a male pup? either way, lovely as always, and i cant wait for the next part, killing Kuro. well i don't know if that would be so great, maybe Kagome could do it in a nice way, something like releasing him from his pain. i dunno. i never feel like i have to ask of direct anything from you, you've always had so much wonderful imagination that i never felt the need to, still don't, you do a grand job of making this r0o a happy r0o.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I had a bit of catching up to do. I cannot wait for your next update. This is truly a greatly thought out story.
person sugar0o
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

*falls out of chair* N0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o!!!

okay so this whole thing has got me completely up in crazy mode, if i never told you i tend to put things well written into a visual format for of voices and colors, and everything moves in motion, that being said, I've completely been left feeling like its the season finally and we've got to wait for the next season to finally find out what happened. OMFG it was so well written and well thought out, and the drama, and emotions are fantastic, but OMFG i want more *whines* wonderful job as always. and of coarse i will be waiting for the next chapter. lovely ma`am just lovely! - r0o
person sugar0o
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i can never say how much i absolutely adore this story, the way you allow the characters to grow and flourish is well, amazing, and the fact that your plot is not lacking, another amazing feat. its hard sometimes to continue such a detailed story but i find that your never lacking. always a joy to red, this was no different, and of coarse i cant wait til the next update - r0o
person mrs sesshy
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chappie...it's so true...men can be so clueless sometimes...as my man always says when he upsets me..."what? i didn't do anything?"...so right, when can they learn fast that sometimes they have to do something nicer to keep as happy...i'm glad sess-sama finally made the move... i can't wait for the next update...i really want to see her cheeky and fighting spirit again...keep it up!
person Aideen
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooovvveee it!!! Please up-date soon!!! I have to know what happens next!!!! I love this story soooo much!!!