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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations ! This story was very entertaining, the characters very good. I thought Tadashi would become Michi's mate, I hoped that Inuyasha would be mated before the end of the story, but you didn't write it, snifffff ! Anyway this was all good (I'm licking my lips...) and I can say I'm impressed with your capacity to produce another wonderful and totally different story in the same time.
Well, thank you very much !
From a french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France,
Merely Truth
Well, thank you very much !
From a french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France,
Merely Truth
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like shouting Long Live the Queen!!! Finally crowned the lady of the west and showed her strength! I smiled about Sess-sama being called a coward and giving her the silent treatment...male anywhere is the same! Can't wait for the next update... i really enjoyed this one.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yanno if i could write out the perfect sound of of a squeal i would, i loved this! its so very amazing and i'll never be able to say as much of that. its just wonderful!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yanno your going to have to tie up the last chapter with them all either reading the Wizard of Oz or watching the movie, so they all get it. i just thought i should tell ya that :p
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Your Story!! You have a very Creative Mind you bring me a lot of inspiration in doing my anime art! thank you!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe that I have not read this story sooner!
Miroku is a buddhist monk, would he not refer to buddha rather than kami-sama? "Rin, you are an amazing woman, for whom I thank the Kami daily." (emmaren: Miroku) I believe that was in chapter 13.
In reference to "water severely muted the scents of surrounding area" (emmaren: Inuyasha, chapter 17) It was actually proven that water carries smells so that a dog (preferably a blood hound) could track his prey down quicker than he/she normally would. Water does not mask scents, it acts more like a flame signal saying 'here i am!" You can check that out on mythbusters on discovery channel or probably on youtube/ megavideo... Its a whole show on dogs, how to train an old dog new tricks, how to fool a guard dog and a blood hounds sense of smell. Its quite fascinating, you should check it out!
I love how you have merged the concept of the Wizard of Oz into Inu Yasha, its ingenious! I have only read Tinker and Windwolf by Wen Spencer who has successfully inter graded the Wizard of Oz into the plot so well, but you have went beyond my expectations, you owned it!
I love how a lot of what you have written shows creativity in plot, diction, character development and in originality! I never thought of obsidian as a way to describe Kagome's hair.
I loved the way you made the comparison between music and dance to love making. It was almost poetic when Sesshomaru and Kaogme made love for the first time. *whips tear from the corner of my eye* "If music be the food of love play on!" (Shakespeare, A Midsummers Night Dream) *wiggles eyebrows* Talking about lovemaking Sesshomaru is one sexy-god-of-sex of a youkai to Inscribe his name on Kagome's shoulder while enacting the worlds oldest dance.
Besides writing about what I would love to do to Sesshoumaru if he were actually alive -*sighs* woo is me- I have nothing else to comment on, well maybe how much I enjoyed reading this!
Good luck
Miroku is a buddhist monk, would he not refer to buddha rather than kami-sama? "Rin, you are an amazing woman, for whom I thank the Kami daily." (emmaren: Miroku) I believe that was in chapter 13.
In reference to "water severely muted the scents of surrounding area" (emmaren: Inuyasha, chapter 17) It was actually proven that water carries smells so that a dog (preferably a blood hound) could track his prey down quicker than he/she normally would. Water does not mask scents, it acts more like a flame signal saying 'here i am!" You can check that out on mythbusters on discovery channel or probably on youtube/ megavideo... Its a whole show on dogs, how to train an old dog new tricks, how to fool a guard dog and a blood hounds sense of smell. Its quite fascinating, you should check it out!
I love how you have merged the concept of the Wizard of Oz into Inu Yasha, its ingenious! I have only read Tinker and Windwolf by Wen Spencer who has successfully inter graded the Wizard of Oz into the plot so well, but you have went beyond my expectations, you owned it!
I love how a lot of what you have written shows creativity in plot, diction, character development and in originality! I never thought of obsidian as a way to describe Kagome's hair.
I loved the way you made the comparison between music and dance to love making. It was almost poetic when Sesshomaru and Kaogme made love for the first time. *whips tear from the corner of my eye* "If music be the food of love play on!" (Shakespeare, A Midsummers Night Dream) *wiggles eyebrows* Talking about lovemaking Sesshomaru is one sexy-god-of-sex of a youkai to Inscribe his name on Kagome's shoulder while enacting the worlds oldest dance.
Besides writing about what I would love to do to Sesshoumaru if he were actually alive -*sighs* woo is me- I have nothing else to comment on, well maybe how much I enjoyed reading this!
Good luck
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was beautiful! Also, I'm glad that Inuyasha is truly a brother to Sesshoumaru finally. The pups are described so sweetly that I want to hold and cuddle them. Poor Kuro. I still don't believe he deserves death. Sure, he didn't take into account everything that would happen, but at least the traitors have been exposed and done away with. The poor guy has suffered enough. He deserves a peaceful life with Michi. OK, so I'm a romantic.
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well as always m`dear, this was lovely. Its amazing and sad that they missed the pups eyes opening, i cant wait to see the hell fire and brimstone that Kagome brings upon those that would stand against her, I cant wait to see all of it really. Your so beautiful and talented with everything that you do, and i am hopelessly lost in your writing, in such a perfect way. its really very lovely. as always, i cant wait for the next update, you never let us down. - r0o
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I have to say that I was very slow in coming to appreciate this story. I actually started it some time ago, got to the point where Sesshomaru basically rapes Kagome the first time and then gave up on reading it. It just didn't draw me in for whatever reason, probably because I've never really cared for the Wizard of Oz. :) However, I decided to give it another try and I am very happy that I did so because this time I couldn't stop reading. You are a very good writer and I am looking forward to reading more.
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I agree that letting Michi kill Madoka was justice. I think what you wrote about Kagome fit the scene perfectly. You can't act like a powerful miko when you're being racked by labor pains and giving birth.
I vote NO, NO, NO to killing Kuro. To me he is a hero. That bitch put him through hell and he deserves to live. In fact I've been thinking for several chapters that he and Michi would make a good match. That's why I was so happy when he saved her from being raped.
I vote NO, NO, NO to killing Kuro. To me he is a hero. That bitch put him through hell and he deserves to live. In fact I've been thinking for several chapters that he and Michi would make a good match. That's why I was so happy when he saved her from being raped.