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for Okaa-san

by Ame2183

person adrianna
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update! Hehe i wonder how Sesshomaru's gonna deal with Rin XD
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An Update! I'm really glad that you continued so quickly. In fact, I am definitely willing to wait a week if the chapters will be in such good standing as the current four.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Moriyo-chan two words simply amazing. I can't wait for more I loved this chappie soo much I wanna see some sesshy begging next chappie lol and a pay raise for our Kagome lol Good job with leaving Souta's ass in jail he deserves it indeed. Well update as soon as you can otherwise I'll go into withdrawls eeek that no pretty lol

Later Days

Loves Arry
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has been amazing from chapter one. I must say that the interaction you have going between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is awesome. ^_^ I'm enjoying this story immensely, so I hope my little review can convince you to keep it going. Can't wait to see what you come up with next! Update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Booo...I was totally hoping that Sess gave his inheritance to Kagome....that would be totally awsome!!!!

Quickly, put up the next chapter!!!
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
demon and the baby interesting. up date soon I can't wait to see how he reacts to this one. great story thanks for posting.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's taken me forever to find a good fanfic (that I haven't read a million times) that really sucks me in! I love how you don't rush into things; the characters are fully developed and it's a nice change. Keep up the good work!
person Ceridwyn
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, sorry about that. I thought I left my email access on on my profile. If you haven't noticed, I'm one of the authors here, not just someone passing through... : ) Anywho, email is faerie_demoness@hotmail.com

This was a great chapter. Each one is very descriptive. Never heard someone mention Sess's locks as platinum before. I also liked that part about dying from blushing to death, that was great. *s* I wonder why Sess was howling as she left...was in despair because he was so used to her being near him nearly 24/7? Or was it because unbeknownst to his own demon heart that he was falling for her and it realized she was leaving for good? Or was it just because he was pissed there was still work to be done that he didn't want to do? *L*

Either way, I hope you surprise us. I enjoy your writing very much. : )

Ja ne! ~Much Love~ FD
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh sesshu's pissed and Kags has finally quite wonder what she's going to do?! Can't wait for the next chappie I love this story
It's a shame this isn't getting many reviews but I know exactly how that feels I'm not as nice as you are I recevied only 3 reviews from AFF and 0 from a-single-spark from a story that I published in june and the first day out I had 50 reviews from A-single-spark and 10 from AFF in only one day then the second chap goes up and zero feedback yet with 8000hits and my rating a 5 told me ppl were reading and liking it but not reviewing and it hurt so I stopped updating but I'm glad you won't makes me happy lol. Update soon please

Loves Arry
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO please dont wait to put out another chap its soooo good!!! and I would also like to be put on an update list.

My email is:

biganimefan1@sbcglobal.net

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