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for Okaa-san

by Ame2183

person lala_land
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you migth not get lots of updates but You rocks at writing no doubt about that!!! Update
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee! Another amazing chapter!! Update when you can~I'm in love with this story. :)
person KATIE
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!~

How could you leave it there!!! Dont you know we the readers need more to substain a healthy and happy life!?!?!

You have to update with equel or greater proficiancy as chapter 5!!!!

Please update constantlly.

your loyal reader,


~Ryokomaru~



schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good start to this story. I have trouble imagining that the Souta from the anime would turn out that way, but it's your story, and that means it is your rules. LOL I cannot wait to see more, so please add me to your update list. My email is melrosefaulkner@yahoo.com. Thanks.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah that is a nice. Please up date soon
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa was that intense and super sexy but left me with a case of UST meanie lol. Well obviously this chappie was the not so conservative one lol ^__^ update soon Moriyo! It simply can't wait lol. Baby rin is here yay but why did Sesshou go all beasty in the first place?

Loves Arry
give me more cries my libido haha
person gryphonwills
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please keep it going.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! LOOOOOOVE! It was well worth the wait (not that the wait was too long, you take however much time you need to pump out greatness!). I'm so excited to see what happens next!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo hun. That was nice. I like how Sesshomaru yelled at Souta. Update soon Please?