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for Okaa-san

by Ame2183

person sugar0o
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter, hope your doing well, update soon!
person Lily0816
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful! Please don't stop writing it! I look forward to read more of it soon. =)
person jampack
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi!...

please update!!! it's really good.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOU!!! I think the test is over by now I'm dying to read an update ;__; I'm crying *sniffles* please update soon Moriyo!!!

Arry
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started to read this story and I really enjoy it. I hope you do good on your Calculus Exam. and I can't wait for an update, also thanx for the really really really long chapters.


ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. its cute. funny as all hell. i love the little girl finding it pertinent that she strip to get his attention. idk. when you update i would love it if you sent me a email stating yo've done so. teamedward007@aol.com
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo hilarious!!! I can't wait for the next update freaking great, poor sesshy in line with that stupid old hag and her brat lol I love love love this story to peices. The interactions with all the chracters are great and very original I want more lol now I shall wish you look on your Cal final so you can update again hehe GOOD LUCK!!

Loves Arry
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is sooo sad to do that to sessy!! Even though I myself am a woman, I dont enjoy shopping that much... I side with sessy and murdering everyone!!!~
person Kry
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome. i love it. <3<3
person sugar0o
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, okay seriously i really want kags to come to the rescue and put a number on the store manager and save Sess from the almighty girly baby store with horrible mothers that slap business youkai that could kill them, i would love to see her defend Sess like a woman would her man, even if he's not really her man. SCATHING!!! kags needs to have like a silver tongue to do it, and have that woman crying!

other then my personal wish, i actually really liked this chapter i cant wait to see what Sess does with the headline in the paper, and maybe the first night with Rin and Kags in the house, it'd be cute if he went to sleep with Rin on his chest. I really hope RIn's going to be okay, i mean not knowing about her past thats kinda dangerous. o well i'm sure you know what your doing, i really do love this fic. nice job. - r0o