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well i do think it's a great start but I also believe that now you can take your time with htem. I think she wold be confused and though she may feel obilgated to be with him physically because of the mark ...and the way she had been reacting to his touches and allowing it without sternly putting her foot down about it she would not want to mate with him fully.

So i think some wooing should happen. but i think that it should not just be Sess wooing her but her wooing him . Because after awhile I think he would stop asking and wait to see what she would do.

anyway great start . hope you start this one back up b/c it has promise

lol hopefully if i keep reviewing thic story you will *hint,,hint* update it

i've found you again! hehe i like this story , Betrothal is still my fav but this does have promise . but i will say i think the later option would be more in character with how you have had kagome react. i think yes she would be shocked but she would understand the circumstance that led up to it however i think that Sess would have a hard tme not blaming himself plus i think kagome though she might be willing doesnt know how to love hi completely yet which he's going to want and that would cause some problems... have fun with it and take your time in the development of the story..we all know your chapters are worth the wait !!

Yay! A third chapter! I always
get excited when I see your stories
updated! Whoo! By the way, that
was a great chapter. Even through
the battle, it was quite romantic.
Like always, I'll be checking up!

so far this story is really wonderful.

what happened to kagura and kaede?

you should have sessh figure out some of kag's background in the library, or have a dream thing they share.. something like that.. umm.. they need a new enemy though cause its seems soo blah with out some bad guys, ya know? i think that her inu instincts should kick in and have her realize what happens and she must accept it, to some degree anyways.. need some angry kag's there, always makes a great fic when she makes her own choices.. im being vauge cause its ur fic and u need ideas to an extent, right?

So good luck and have fun.
higan

Honestly, this is probably one of
the best stories I've read in a long,
long time. I can't wait to read the
new chapters. I just want to keep
readig more. This story is orignal
and... gees, I don't even know what to
say. Just wow. Truly.

great first chapter I hope you up date soon I would love to read more Thanks for posting it.

WOW that was great, Ive read something like it b4. Anyway i hope you write more chappies matey. Anyway gotta Run

Hey, you're off to a great start. I can't wait to see where you'll take it!!! If you need someone to bounce ideas off of you can e-mail me, I'd love to help! Anyway, wonderful job so far, continue!
~Vanessa (Loveisa_movement@yahoo.com)

Really good so far. It's an interesting plot you have. Everything looks good. The story flowed very well. Some things were a little confusing, but I'm sure I can figure them out as the chapters progress. Please update when possible.