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for Withholding

by salomewilde

person orvida
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i definitely have to get that movie and i especially loved the part about gamera i love that turtle so much I grew up watching godzilla and gamera.
person WTW
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read the other sequels and by far this really does lead up to the climax! XD

You could have totally just placed them all into one story but I can see how they work pleasently just as they are. Thank you for writing and I do hope to see more from you.

I like how your taking this. Its a bit of a new twist in how delicate yet hard such a relationship could be.

I wounder if Jaken will say anything about Sessy's claim of Rin being his mate, lol. I look forward to the next bit of the story!!!

Take your time though, no rush! Thank you again.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a nice. you can never take what is sessy and live to talk about it. it will be good to see him fight for her for a change.
person nchsmi
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found your stories today, and read each one. They are truly beautiful, you're styling is elegant! I enjoyed them very much! B reading U! L8r!
person orvida
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this story gets hotter each time i read it.and that's a good thing. what's up with jaken screaming and interupting the lovers and at such abad time can't wait for the next post to up.
person nessi
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good so far!^^ but what´s up with jaken???
update soon please!!!!!!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that no good jaken all ways killing the mood, and it was just getting good.
person Ppalae1
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, it was getting good until that big mouthed Jaken's ass had to scream and mess up everything. They both should kill the little green fool and get back to what they were about to do....... Great story can't wait to read the next chapter...^____^.
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good. I anticipate your next update!!