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A clearly wonder ful and the way you show the maturing of Rin in body and mind and the acceptancte of her love is truly wonderful and heartwarming

I LOVE IT AND ALL THE OTHER ONES TO IT
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

I loved the ending could have had a lot more lemoness to it but over all i loved it.
If you did a sequel you could have it were rin develops feelings for inuyasha but not as a mate and vice versa were kagome gets jealous of the elleged bond and tries to go after sesshomura i just love a good conflict what do you think i would never pair those 2 2gether for all the tea in china.I love sessxrin to much.

i hate ending too. i'm just sad that they will not have a kid of there own. they are all good ideas. i could not pick one, so maybe you could combine them all into one nice long story.

I love this chapter! It was so great! And all of your ideas sound absolutely wonderful so I think you should continue with this. Please please keep going!!!

*sigh* Damn you Sesshoumaru!! You and your prejudice!

BUT once again, a fabulous story!! I surely hope that is not the end! You stories seem to always have to right elements! This has passion, angst, violence, romance, drama!! It has everything!! One of the best SessRin fics out there.

And I love the way you write Sesshoumaru. It's so well written, it's...him! You write his character perfectly! And Rin, too! She's so...what's the word...Gah!! I can't explain it, but it's totally perfect.

For her, even after spending so much time with Sesshoumaru, she is still easily fooled by him. And he, not being able to express himself, causes so much drama and turmoil within her.

Whew! I can't wait to read more! If you post this on Fanfiction.net, then I would be able to add you on my Alert list, so whenever you update, I would be notified. But I guess this is rated too high...FF.net would kick ya off. But I've read tons of smut(without plots) on that site...

Anyhow, great story so far!! I'm anxious to read more!!

BTW, on chapter 3, the last sentence, Sesshoumaru refers to Kyura as "Ryura". Just thought I point that out. Great work, waiting for more!!

Oh the drama! I love it! Poor Rin though. Sesshy needs to grow up, seriously. Oh but I wanna know what he sensed in her that made him gasp. Sesshy gasping, it's almost too much. But keep it coming cause I'm loving every minute of it. You're an amazing writer and your use of vocab in this story is outstanding and beautiful! Don't keep us waiting long for an update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

did he forget what he said and did to close her off? next one should be really good.

Well, that was bittersweet. I really like all these short stories of yours. I hope that you continue to update.

LOL. Sesshomaru has already Pwned Kyora three times out of three that they have met in battle. Third time was the charm for him in the movie. How many more times will there be, or will Kyora finally win a round?