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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update! This is such a WONDERFUL story!
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused about something in this last chapter. But first let me say that I have really enjoyed it and just wanted to have some things clarified. In the scene Sess comments about putting a ring on Kagome's finger and she gets angry and shoves him and asks him how dare he think she would marry him and did he even think of asking if she wanted to marry him.
Then in the next breathe she says Is this your way of shutting me up, to buy me a ring that shows I went to bed with you and heads to door. When Sess stops her she is so mad she hits him. Sess then goes on to say I don't give my conquests jewelry, I throw them out. I was talking about an engagement ring, isn't that what human men do when they want to marry a female. Then Kagome sees he is puzzled and laughs then hugs him.
Okay... my puzzlement is this. At beginning she knows he is talking about an engagement/wedding ring, then she seems to think he trying to buy her off (though the other chapters and meeting with InuPapa lets her know that Sess has made her his mate and that is for life). Once he says he was talking engagement, she is happy/huggy and they go make dinner.
So, I'm wondering if this was a glitz in writing? Her reaction to him wanting to give her a ring just seems extreme either way. She should know he wasn't trying to "buy" her off from her discussions with Sango and his father. And getting upset about him wanting to buy her an engagement ring seems over the top since she again knows his mind set regarding her being his mate and what that entails, and she has been cuddling with him in his bed and had not gotten upset, so... I'm just confused by her behavior. So I thought I'd ask the author to clarify the issue....
Thanks, and can't wait for next chapter.
Rhonda
Then in the next breathe she says Is this your way of shutting me up, to buy me a ring that shows I went to bed with you and heads to door. When Sess stops her she is so mad she hits him. Sess then goes on to say I don't give my conquests jewelry, I throw them out. I was talking about an engagement ring, isn't that what human men do when they want to marry a female. Then Kagome sees he is puzzled and laughs then hugs him.
Okay... my puzzlement is this. At beginning she knows he is talking about an engagement/wedding ring, then she seems to think he trying to buy her off (though the other chapters and meeting with InuPapa lets her know that Sess has made her his mate and that is for life). Once he says he was talking engagement, she is happy/huggy and they go make dinner.
So, I'm wondering if this was a glitz in writing? Her reaction to him wanting to give her a ring just seems extreme either way. She should know he wasn't trying to "buy" her off from her discussions with Sango and his father. And getting upset about him wanting to buy her an engagement ring seems over the top since she again knows his mind set regarding her being his mate and what that entails, and she has been cuddling with him in his bed and had not gotten upset, so... I'm just confused by her behavior. So I thought I'd ask the author to clarify the issue....
Thanks, and can't wait for next chapter.
Rhonda
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful as is, but an epilog eould be nice.
Luv,
Patty
Luv,
Patty
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you did a very good job, I like how you wrote the finding of eachother really good job. Thanks for posting and I hope to see more
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its starting out good.. i hope it stays that way. keep it up. Till the next chapter.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol thats great.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh, i was a bit skeptical of this story but i really enjoyed it! plz update soon!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapter! It was a great one! Please update again soon!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...that was wierd. Sesshomaru's dad looked for, and found Kagome (extremely fast, I might add) and then just walked off and left her up to her own devices. Was he planning on telling her of the importance in the mating mark? Its true meaning to an inuyoukai? He just popped in and told her to beware of Sesshomaru's natural instincts and then popped back out. I wonder if he is planning to tell Sesshomaru who she is, or leave it up to him to find out during the class? Since he was concerned that she could be injured it goes against reason that he would just leave her to her own fate with a potentially dangerous mate out on the prowl. If the father could smell the two of them mingled in her scent, then surly Sesshomaru will be able to smell it as well. The class should be interesting. I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to see what you have planned. Thanks for the update.
~Rin
~Rin