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wow, i love it!! are going to make a sequel? you should... or write another chapter or.. even better, start a story!!! xP, i cant stand the cliffy

Nooooooo, it can't end like that!!!! Oh well, but anyway DAMN WHAT A GREAT STORY!!!! lol. I think I read just about everyone of you'r storys, lol. You have a way with words that just pull you in and you don't want to stop reading till the end, then me being me and greedy I want more, ;P lol.

OMG loved it. it was so sad that he didnt catch her at Inuyasha's house but i guess thats ok. they can always meet up again. i wish you had done a sequel but i suppose now i can make up my own ending. thanks 4 a great fanfic! Being a fellow author (that never gets anything posted because it's kinda crap) i have great respect for anyone who can finish a story!

WOW WOW WOW!! What an amazing one shot! That was absolutely perfect and I don't think it could have been any better. The smut was great, the plot was great, and the little twist at the end was great. You write very beautifully and I would love to read more of your work. Perhaps maybe a continuation of this ^_^

You have the perfect writing style for a longer chaptered fic. This is a longer one-shot and I can tell you took your time and put a lot of thought into every word. You didn't half ass anything. The detailing was perfect and I loved your Sessy and Kagome. Looking forward to more of your work!

This is truly one of the hottest most steamest fics that I've read in a LONG time. So different from all the others especially the end of it. I love all your fics so much! lol

~*elisa*~

this should diffidently not be a one shot :drools:: this is too yummy you MUST continue it PLEASE Write more on this

ahhh this is all keep it going please I love this story...

Very tasteful and I hope it continues...even though it's supposed to be a oneshot, right?

OH MY GOD YOU ARE AMAZING!!! This is seriously one of the best one shots I've ever read! It was very well written and really original! ^^

OKay there is just no way in bloody hell this can be a one shot! NO WAY! NONE! you hear me! *points finger* you have got to start working on Chapter 2 - marriage/baby/death! that was one of your best stories ever, so much heart feeling, passion, i can't honestly rave enough about how good that was, and yet you only offer us this, and in the end they pass each other like ships in the night? NO! you hafta write more, your gunna make us crazed with need for conclusion. its just not fair if you leave us all hot and bothered with no finish. tease! but i suppose if you wont write more then i'll be happy that we got this in the first place, but really would love to have more to read on this. *sigh* sometimes you really do make'm just too good to leave at that. loved it! If i could save it to my account as a favored story, i would. DAMN GOOD JOB! - r0o