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for What Your Eyes Can Do

by SunsetMiko

person Ivy
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad your adding more ^_^ The little preview was cool! Will be looking for this fic when it comes out ;-)
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can not get on the mailing list for this one... it says i dont have a valid email when its the same email addy i used for syndrome......

its good and i am looking forward to the next....

PS: i did add you on livejournal....
person Rai
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing!! Good work! I really enjoyed it! can't wait for the sequel
person Merely Truth
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good idea !!! Poor Sessh, doesn't know that he missed her. I so hope you'll add chapters ..... And if a mischaevious father put his nose in the story, it could be horrible for our dog...
Thank you very much for your stories !

A french mother and reader,

Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth
person Aleya
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I enjoyed that, and the ending couldn't have been better...
person sallysour
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the BEST sess/kags fics I've ever read! I absolutely love the whole story set up and looks like an awesome plot and to tell you the truth I can't see any real fault in it! Usually I'm sort of critical about most stories, but this one is just to good to even think anything negative about! I really hope you update soon!! Keep up the great work!
person Panchat
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, please tell me you'll put a sequel to it, pplllzzzzzzzzz. it's just not fair to leave it like that!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How dare you leave that at a one night stand???? I command you to write a sequel to it so I know how they end up together and more about the history between Inuyasha and Kagome!!! This was a great story and I need to get some closure out of this! Don't you Dare Disappoint me Woman!!!!!
Seriously though, it was great and I want more!!!!
person Ivy
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a cool beginning! Kagome's so naugthy ^_^ Can't wait for chapter 2!
person Rhonda
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT???? A oneshot? Please say you reconsider and make full fledge story... You can't leave 'em like this, they gotta get back together. haha... Just wanted you to know, that I think this should become full story like your others --- which I love and follow religiously. I have become a big fan of your work. You are GOOD... and I can't wait for each installment. In fact, I am fixing to read The Syndrome's next installment now, and I am nearly caught up with She Who The Prophesy Foretold, I of course found your stories after you had begun writing (which I can now enjoy several chapters in one sitting) and read Syndrome to end first, and am nearly caught up on SWTPF...

Keep up good work. You are an incredible writer with so much talent. I can see Sess in The Syndrome -- the kitchen scene oh my gosh... I could just imagine his eyes looking at her with such pleading. Thanks for sharing your imagination with the rest of us.
Rhonda