rate_review Reviews

I loved it. I thought you put great deatil into the characters. If I had never watched Inuyasha in my entire life and the first thing I read about Inuyash was this I could have got an almost identical insite into their personalities and what they looked like. Keep on writing.

I give you something I give very few people,
my respect

with much respect


The Prince of Madness

Great story. Really great tho I just want to tell you that the Japanese wear white as a sing of morning not in a wedding. They wear black.

I believe you're writing a sequel for this story
so I had to read the first. I thought it was very
sweet and I enjoyed it. I'm not really into Inuyasha
and Kagome pairing, but I loved yours. I can't wait
to start the sequel. Good luck with your stories!

This story was sweet and the lemon was delicious too. I love how you portraid Inuyasha in this, actually you did all the characters rather well. The only thing I even feel that wasn't completely right was what you mentioned about the wedding ceremony. From what I know of it, it should have been a Shinto ceremony, even as far back as the Sengoku Jidai. Shinto has been the promonant religion in Japan for well over 500 years. Even though now both Shinto and Buddhism are both practiced at the same time in modern Japan. Back then and even more so now Shinto would have been over almost all life related ceremonies. Buddhism generally presides over death since shinto does not. Also from what I know of the Japanese (Shinto) wedding ceremony you descibed a good bit of it but said it was Buddhist. I really did enjoy this story,and dont meen anything by correcting or critic-ing your work. I was just trying to help. It was well written and I really enjoyed it. I hope my review can help in your future works.

Very sweet! I thought Inuyasha was a little ooc, but overall, the story created a warm and fuzzy feeling. Nice job!

I
LOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVE
It please continue this great story!!

Very romantic and cool story. I really liked it. Thanks.

Wonderful and nice original story!

What a lovely, sweet story! I enjoyed this so much. Very well done. However, there are a few things I just have to point out: Punctuation never comes after closing quotation marks. An elipsis is 3 dots... It is never followed by another form of punctuation, other than ending quotation marks, single quotation marks, parenthesis or brackets. But it is a good story, good job!

Aha! I see we were both on a similar bandwidth! I sat down and read your whole story in one gulp, and I enjoyed it a lot. and then I found out you had reviewed mine while I was reading yours! How fun!