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by salomewilde

person Maddi_Chan
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I rather like this story. The chapter with Maroku actually wasn't bad: it was a good breather in my opinion. The chapter with uke Sess was damn sexy and now that you've honestly introduced him into the story, I can't wait to see what will happen next. I'd also like to thank you for doing the impossible: I actually--dare I say--like Koga in this story. (I'll admit, I hate him in the show but that might be because I despise Kagome and he loves to fight over her.)
person beth2438
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow I can't wait to see what Seshoumaru does. Please update soon. I love this story.
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice and hot story so far..
Well done
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
both kouga and inuyasha thinking they are in control; however did you manage two semes? i really like the way you are keeping them in character in this situation. most stories have one or the other going all girly.

who will be seme when sesshoumaru joins the group, though? it's quite a thought!
person mamarita
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And what is Sesshomaru going to do now that he has caught Koga and InuYasha giving each other delectable blowjobs??? His turn to be seme? hehehehehehehehe!!! I love it! DLS
person szaugg
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heya! Thanks for the email - I'd totally missed the new chapters! Wee.

Ha, you totally got me with the uke Sessh. I was thinking to myself - this is hot, but it really doesn't seem to match the Inuyasha from earlier chapters at all. I did not catch on that it was a dream until the end, and then it suddenly all made sense. LOL - too fucking funny!
person mamarita
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, the DemonLady can forgive this dream sequence this one time- but no- not again. Sesshy cannot be uke to his brother for real. LMAO!!!! You have a definite way with words. I love this story- well, as long as it's a oneshot with Sesshomaru being uke! DLS
person mamarita
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru, huh? Whatever happens, please don't let Sesshy be uke to either of them. Sesshomaru is so seme it isn't funny! DLS
person mamarita
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a remarkable way of writing and a wicked sense of humor. I love this story. Please update soon. DLS
person aggg
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more.