rate_review Reviews

ok. when i first read this story i wasnt so sure about it. I mean SESS is my fav character of all time. And his character seemed a little off. so i was about 2 read another story, but i decided 2 read on...and im so glade i did. U had me hooked by the 3rd chappie. I have 2 say that this story is amoung my top favs now. SO keep up the good work. I cant wait 2 see what happens next.

I'm going to be honest here. The grammar, spelling, and punctutaion are awful. It really takes away from the flow of the story. I know that a previous reviewer has stated this before. That is something that shouldn't be overlooked. If you personally, are bad in all these three areas you need to find a beta.

I think you have a cute plotline here and if it weren't for all those mistakes it would be really nice. I adore this couple. Yet, I truly feel that if a writer does not take the time to make sure their work is edited and up to par in everyway, then I shouldn't take my time to read it. Not trying to be rude. I'm just trying to offer you some advice to improve your fic.

I love you I can’t get enough of this story please please continue writing. ^_^

heh, i liked thiese chapters they where quite entertaining.can't wait to see everyones expression when they go to school the next day!

nice story i realy like cant wait for the rest update soon plz

I love your story!!It is great! I also love the quick posts! I will check out your other works as well. Thank-you for giving my life some readable entertainment.")

Write more! Write more! This is so funny. Please write more ^_^

heh, ok at first i was skeptical of the hole thing ut i really like it! plz write soon!

This is sweet! I can't wait for the next story.