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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read high school stories, but I liked your other one so decided to try it. So far it is cute and funny (read first 6 chapters), and I will keep reading to see where it goes. You may want to edit chapter 6 though. All the punctuation marks came out as weird looking special characters making it hard to read.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! It is a testament to the quality of the tale that, despite my inner grammar nazi screaming in fits, I keep reading. *grin*
One thing you might look into, it seems the formatting got messed up a bunch on this one, and possibly some other chapters. The quotes and such were all out of whack. It's still possible to read it, but highly distracting.
Hmm...I think this will be my second review ever. Congrats and keep writing! :)
One thing you might look into, it seems the formatting got messed up a bunch on this one, and possibly some other chapters. The quotes and such were all out of whack. It's still possible to read it, but highly distracting.
Hmm...I think this will be my second review ever. Congrats and keep writing! :)
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe so the plot thickens
i'm liking this story
update soon okay?
i'm liking this story
update soon okay?
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! You have a real talent for writing. So please keep updating!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
perhaps you should rework this chapter, the lay out and the words are wrong. not sure if it's from your word or if it's Aff.net that messed it up o.0
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say that I do enjoy reading this story. It is one of the few stories that I get all hyped up about when I notice that they've been updated.
Please keep up the good work!
Kat.
Please keep up the good work!
Kat.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story. please update soon???
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
prertty good story except i skimmed though everything when i get a chance i'll read the whole thing, what grade are they in?
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just an FYI -- seems something goofy happened with the formatting in this chapter. Looks like some kind of encoding error where your quotation marks aren't showing correctly.