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June 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Ended wayy to soon. I feel like the time jumps were a bit annoying but otherwise it was good. Extremely rushed which made me sad. The only actual sex scene we got was some hetero stuff. I came for the yaoi lol.
Still it was worth a read.
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*scratches head*
It moves a bit fast for me, I think. The premise is excellent; there is so much to explore with Naraku's cruelty and innate dominance, that I think many fic writers overlook because he's so very nasty. The demon plant bean thing though was inspired. :D
I think it's good, I really do, but it feels like there's something missing in the later chapters, and I can't QUITE put my finger on what it is.
It moves a bit fast for me, I think. The premise is excellent; there is so much to explore with Naraku's cruelty and innate dominance, that I think many fic writers overlook because he's so very nasty. The demon plant bean thing though was inspired. :D
I think it's good, I really do, but it feels like there's something missing in the later chapters, and I can't QUITE put my finger on what it is.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like, no I LOVE subby Sesshy and dommy Naraku (as I now call it -_-) even if others do not. I know a lot of people that do, too. And I agree with you...Chapter 5 was Awesomeo! That plant mind control demon thingy is a nice touch. I can't wait to see where this story is going (I have my hunches but I won't know until you unravel it...) and I'll try to review again soon. Adios for now...
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm enjoying it so far. For some reason, from the moment she was introduced in the anime, I never liked Kagura. Dunno why. I ALMOST feel sorry for Kagura, ha ha! Almost...
Pissing off Sesshoumaru isn't the smartest thing to do, but then again, Naraku likes to piss EVERYONE off for some reason. I think he enjoys the attention. He must be some kind of attention whore or something. Well, unfortunately for him, Sesshoumaru isn't anywhere near as dumb as InuYasha is. And face is, InuYasha IS an idiot...*expertly dodging the enflamed arrows of the InuYasha fans*
But yeah, even though I'm SUPPOSED to be studying for an exam, I wanted to leave you a review. I try to read, keep up with, and review most of the stories that I get to read. Keep up the good work.
Pissing off Sesshoumaru isn't the smartest thing to do, but then again, Naraku likes to piss EVERYONE off for some reason. I think he enjoys the attention. He must be some kind of attention whore or something. Well, unfortunately for him, Sesshoumaru isn't anywhere near as dumb as InuYasha is. And face is, InuYasha IS an idiot...*expertly dodging the enflamed arrows of the InuYasha fans*
But yeah, even though I'm SUPPOSED to be studying for an exam, I wanted to leave you a review. I try to read, keep up with, and review most of the stories that I get to read. Keep up the good work.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least Sesshomaru's mind is free of that disgusting hanyou's control. Now for him to take back his blades and destroy the vile being! YAY!!! Please update as soon as possible, this is really getting good now! DLS
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good please update soon
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ignore that erika person. She is stupid and immature. I don't know what she was trying to pull with that "no comment" thing. Maybe she was trying to be funny. All I know is it was retarded and a waste of space. Hell, even a flame would have been better...
I love your story and I love how In Character everyone is! Sure, in fanfiction, you can mold the characters a bit and make them evolve and such, which is fine and refreshing as long as you don't completely change them.
I've seen some rather pathetic Sesshoumarus out there...and most of them act NOTHING like him. And I can see Sessh as an uke because he's always in control of himself and his emotions... and anyone that's like that wants to have at least one aspect of themselves not in control. But Naraku...I've seen people make him uke-ish and girly and completely OOC like they do to Fluffy, and its not pretty. Blah.
Kagura is a little hussy...trying to manipulate Sesshoumaru like that. She's just like Naraku. I don't think he's stupid enough to fall for her trick, but we shall see. ^^
GOOD JOB! ^_^ Didn't mean to rant, but that critcism of how some people OOC our favorite demons is supposed to compliment you even more since you're doing a splendid job!
I love your story and I love how In Character everyone is! Sure, in fanfiction, you can mold the characters a bit and make them evolve and such, which is fine and refreshing as long as you don't completely change them.
I've seen some rather pathetic Sesshoumarus out there...and most of them act NOTHING like him. And I can see Sessh as an uke because he's always in control of himself and his emotions... and anyone that's like that wants to have at least one aspect of themselves not in control. But Naraku...I've seen people make him uke-ish and girly and completely OOC like they do to Fluffy, and its not pretty. Blah.
Kagura is a little hussy...trying to manipulate Sesshoumaru like that. She's just like Naraku. I don't think he's stupid enough to fall for her trick, but we shall see. ^^
GOOD JOB! ^_^ Didn't mean to rant, but that critcism of how some people OOC our favorite demons is supposed to compliment you even more since you're doing a splendid job!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no comment what so ever
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Can't wait to read what Sesshy poo will do next :)
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Artistically written and demonstratively spoken. I love this story-even if I hate the actual pairing. Naraku is not worthy of Sesshomaru and has been proven to be a lesser demon many times over, so it has to be some form of magic that Naraku uses. I won't believe otherwise!!!! Still, I cannot wait for an update! DLS