rate_review Reviews

sorry for not being clear in my other review. i'll try to do better, now.

the more dialogue there is in a story, or script, the more the emotionality is relegated to whoever is doing the speaking to convey. as there is no true speaker at this point, the emotionality is up to the reader to put in, instead of the writer.

i guess my mind is not creative emough to put a lot of my own emotion into the words.

i really did like your story, and i thank you for sharing it with all of us.

Great job! I was so happy that Sesshomaru called Shippo 'the newest member of their family'. I also liked that they decided to let Shippo believe that most of what had happened to him was 'a horrible nightmare'. It should give the poor thing some peace of mind! So, the jewel went to Kagome, huh? Maybe, that could be the focus for the sequel. A new problem could arise with Kagome surrounding the jewel. She may need to return, to be rid of the jewel once and for all! Maybe, Kagome could still have some underlined resentment towards InuYasha and Sesshomaru, over being dumped for Sesshomaru. I would also love to see how the children turned out. How they looked in their 'humanoid' form. Especially, Kuromaru. I would think he would look like InuYasha and his late grandmother, Izayoi! Again great job! B reading U (soon)!

L8r!

We vote for both if you're willing you've got talent to spare and Af thinks you should write for Manga or Anime I think you could do books with no problem please continue to share with us.

Ryshandra and Afrieal

Oh I love it! please please let there be a sequel, please please. Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha in this story is so hot! and Kawaii! lol. please please have a sequel. I just love this story.

love the new scene!!!it doesn't matter to me which you do, i'll read it either way!! do what you feel like doing. keep up the great work!!!!!!!

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story. I do hope that you continue. Your writing style just makes the story flow. After reading this one I have now also read your others and found them all to be just as well written and enjoyable. Please, do keep up the great work. You do have a gift of words.

Now you know what I want!!! I like the sequels you did for YYH so you know I want a SEQUEL!

i'm not sure about a squel because something bad always happens. maybe you should do another story about the two of them. like all the twist and turns happens before they get there happen endding.

i have to admit, this format didn't seem appealing when i first found this story. but after i started reading, i found i liked it. it keeps the story moving at a quick pace without seeming rushed.

the only problem i have with it now, is that it doesn't lend itself well to emotional development. the motivational factors for the character's actions are sometimes lost.

but i do think it deserves a sequel. i would like to see what life in the castle will all of them would be like.

A sequel? Oh hell YES!!!!!!! Please do a sequel. It would be wonderful to see how the family grows! Plus, what happens to little Shippo! I want to see how InuYasha and Sesshomaru brings him into the fold. And don't forget those cute little puppies, and their big sister, Rin. What will Sesshomaru decide about Tatigami's family? Will Pur and the rest of the cat tribe keep there word, and offer their loyalty to the Inus? Or will they become the new enemy? But, of course, it up to you! B reading U!

L8r!