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SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL That was wonderful I read the whole thing in two day and no sleep...hardly. PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!

Great job, on the editing! The story flows better than b4!
B reading U!

The story was interesting and kept me reading, is the story finished or you going add more? I interested on what plot could be added after everything that Inuyasha and others finished. Perhaps maybe reunion to say goodbye to freinds. thanks again for the great read.

Well, I rather enjoyed that. I don't generally read fics that are in Script format, but I rather liked that. I'll be honest; I had a minor issue with you calling Inuyasha Mother. This is a very common issue in Mpreg sadly, but there are a Million other terms that can be used in it's place. The simplest of these is Daddy... Where as Seshomaru is the Father, you could call inuyasha Daddy, or Barrer, or any other word - not neccessarily English or Japanese, but any word that means Father... Assigning gender roles in Mpreg is one of the things that turn alot of people off to Mpreg. An Author has to remember that even though we have a Male being appointed to a Female biological task that we are still dealing with 2 Males. Therefore, we should avoid making them act TOO feminine.

Still; as I stated, I very much enjoyed this story and I do indeed think that you should do a Sequel. I'm Very interested in seeing the pups grow up and evolving as Characters - establishing thier Rank, as Sesshomaru put it. Maybe Kagome finding a way back, especially if she has the last piece of the Shikon No Tama. After all; while the part of the well that is above ground was destroyed, the well itself is simply a Hole in the ground. It's power actually comes from the God-Tree, which is again, rooted in the ground. Naraku did not destroy the Tree, so it is Possible for Kagome to return.

It's obvious as well that she had a lot of issue with the Inucest. Given the Modern stigma this is ofcourse not surprising, but you could use a Sequel to explore all these angles and Many more as well. Plus, on a Selfish note, I AM sort of a Kouga fan and you did set that up Excellently for the possibility of a threesome hee

Great story and love how you dealt with the loose ends of your cliff hangers. I hope you do a sequel with the gang in the future time with Kagome. Inuyasha and Kagome do need some type of closure. Poor thing must think Inuyasha is dead in her time. She had no information on what happened except that Inu & Sessh were mated. I know you wrote Kouga having feelings for Kagome, but if you do write a sequel with her maybe have her love interest be one of the pups all grown up, perhaps Kuro. Anyway keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Thanks for such a great story. I do hope that you well continue it. It would be nice to know how the puppies grow. And also if Inuyasha gets his tail back. I was also wondering it you were hinting at something happening between Miroku and Lohanna ? But even with these questions I truly did enjoy your story and look forward to you future work

loved the whole story!!! i'll be watching for any more of your stories!!!!

**clapping enthusiasticly** thank you for such a wonderful story. If we might be so bold as to sugguest maybe a small scene where Kagome gets the jewel and dreams of the happy things that go on with her friends? or at least the reason she has it back?

Affie and Rysh

very sweet endding. i'll keep an eye out for what you do next. enjoyed this very much.

You've made a truly great and beautiful story and should pat yourself on the back for story well done! I would love to see a sequel but as it stands it's up to you and your muse! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS STORY WITH ALL OF US AND WE LOOK FORWARD TO WHAT YOU WILL COME OUT WITH NEXT!