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for The True Purpose

by 66Hiei08

schedule February 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh that is SO messed UP!!! Poor Sesshomaru!!! Inuyasha will HAVE to know SOMETHING is UP though when he has a look at his own chest!!!

schedule February 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oooh it is happening!!! Writer I just need to say... This is thee SEXIEST plot WITH porn fic I have ever read!!! I've read a LOT! Your sexual subtleties are so seductive, smooth, and sneaky... You have a talent for causing a raging blaze of hormones to drive a person mad before they even realize it started!!! That is sooo hot!

schedule February 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oooh yea! Definitely! I call it the "Muse Mega Move" it's when your Muse takes the story from you. You become the "translator" if you struggle against the muse the gigadrain zaps your energy! It is kind of difficult to let go and allow her to "do her thing" if one doesn't believe in her exististince enough to submit! Oh and Plot up coming... That "HEALER" I have a feeling Sess should be a bit more cautious about TRUSTING his life to whom? Hopefully not that bitch

schedule February 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I've tried to save my review until it's a bit closer to the end, but this chapter is very confusing to me! I do not get a few things and sincerely hope you can or will explain. 1st the what I thought was an intimate scene turned...??? What Violent?? Left "Sub Inuyasha" mumbling??? Muffled?? In the bed just because Sessh said "Don't move!" how??? WHY? It says he was on his back. So he wasn't smothering??? What HAPPENED there??? This story is very good so I am very engrossed in every detail! So I hope you are still around to assist me in understanding where you are going with the scene here! Next this sentence baffeled me badly! " Sesshomaru feels his first reaction to this gesture, preening." I mean... Preening is a maintenance behaviour found in birds that involves the use of the bill to position feathers... So what is creation is Sessh doing or feeling here exactly?? Very confusing. Please help me understand!! Thank you!

schedule February 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hot DAYUM!!! SAVE some hose water for meeee!!! Happy Valentine's day DAMN IT! It was SOOOO nice I had to read this chapter TWICE I am NOT joking!!! KAMI-SAMA THANK YOU!

person Anonymous
schedule June 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just read this....totally LOVE! Thanks for blessing us with your stories...
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST FAVE STORIES BUT ONE BIG QUESTION DID INU EVER GET HIS TAIL BACK ??????
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absolute YUM!!! i adored this story soo very very much. It was exactly what i was looking for. Just perfectly long and wonderful. Pregnant Inuyasha is starting to become my absolute favorite. From beginning to end i was absolutely riveted!!!! Perhaps a sequel where we see inuyasha preggers again?!!! *begs*
person gravaelf
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that a sequel would be better, maybe about how when they grow up one of the pups marries on of Kouga's?
person gravaelf
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maru is actually a male suffix, so it should be sepparated from the females' names. I just thought you should know. My dad spent some time in Japan in the Vietnam War, one of the few people in his unit who acctually cared enough to learn customs and language; though he won't teach me much of it, he says its not polite because he learned it from Japanese sailors and Airmen.