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I lost the rest of this story that I had on paper, so until I find it. No more will be added. Hope you enjoyed what I submitted so far, though. Sorry.

This was really good! The formatting was new to me but I liked the idea and your writing enough to ignore the script format!

I think if you went with a more usual format and summarized the fic better, you'd get more readers and reviewers!! I like this fic a lot and see great potential in it!!

Try posting this on FanFiction.net; theres more readers there! A chapter a week will get more reviews than posting all 16 chapters at once will. And if you need any help, advice, or a beta-reader I'll gladly help!

love this story!!!! i hope you up date it soon!!!!!!

Wow another fast update! I sure hope that things keep getting better for the two lovers, as it is Shippo could end up with a pretty large extended family with his own kits on the way and I’m sure that Inuyasha will want to be involved in Koga’s life if he ends up pregnant. Keep-em coming.

Poor Shippo… hopefully Inuyasha will decide to return quickly so Shippo can get the comfort he needs. I don’t know how I feel about the possibility of him keeping the coyotes pup, but it would be nice if things could work out well for him and Inuyasha. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next update!