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for When Darkness Falls

by Luma

person szaugg
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very sad and angsty, in a way that makes me want to read more so I can see the poor thing find himself again and happiness.

and then I want the epilogue where all the youkai who tormented him are tortured into hell. If you could, ya know, fit that in, I'd appreciate it.
person Chiaki Dark
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this! I'm a huge fan of H/C when it comes to these two and I really like how your story has Sess as the victim of abuse. Inuyahsha is often portrayed in that role, but he has a strength in him that I'm glad to see here. And then there's MPREG?!! *Pumps fist* Yes!!! I cannot wait to see where this goes, it's already shaping up to be a gem of a fic!! Thanks for sharing!!
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! very exciting^^
person God_of_Insanity
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea you have there. That was a very good prologue and I must say it was well written. I am intrigued and I hope to see more.
person ayillici
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I'm curious to see where it leads.
person nchsmi
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty dark, I can't wait til the next chapter. B reading U!
L8r!
person Dragon7
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
person memorietrail
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh that was very good. i hope that there is more.
person mamarita
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start to the story. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. DLS
person Vyper
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A sad fate for the demon Lord. I do hope that your story has a happier ending although the begining is interesting.