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for When Darkness Falls

by Luma

person nchsmi
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm curious to see, just how deep InuYasha delve into Sess' mind, to help his wounded brother. I just wonder if InuYasha can handle what he'll find. To be honest, I'm wondering myself! Can't wait for the next chapter, B reading U!

PS.
Will their be any incest action in this? A little Mpreg, now that Sess is among his own kind?
person dyami
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mind blowing Sess a slave, WOW. Now Inu who always loved him is probably the only one to bring him to himself, maybe he can now love Inu in return unconditionally. Please email me when you update, this story is to good to be left hanging in limbo.
person wolfluv
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have returned with a vengence! THANK YOU! You and your muse should be proud of this first chapter! I am ready and strapped in for this joy ride that you are so willing to share!!! I saw only a few tiny mistakes you've got the number four at the end of a sentence towards the last paragraphs other wise you're very good!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
person TrixXx
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Luv it. please continue ^^
person ydjessy
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked I hope your next update comes up soon. I really want to know what happens after this.
person memorietrail
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was great ,sad but things look like they may get better. More please.
person Animaangel01
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I can not wait for the next chapter!
person Dragon7
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
person mamarita
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued by this story. I have never liked seeing Sesshomaru displayed as being weak in any manner, but I really love the way you portray him here. He is not completely weak, but brain-washed. He knows enough about himself to know that he is strong, but not strong enough to overcome over a hundred years of abuse. It will be very interesting to see how InuYasha is able to work things out with his brother. And once the collar is removed, and he has his memories back, will Sesshomaru allow InuYasha to become his true mate. I await your update! DLS
person nchsmi
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let the worlds collide, as long as the story stays interesting- I DON'T CARE!!! Update soon, please. B reading U!

L8r!