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for Yesterday's Pain

by feudalman

person Verakum
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first i wanna say so sorry about your grandma... :(

second i wish you keep this comming as the story and the plot seems to be pretty cool...
person osherry
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. Please keep posting! :-) I need to know what happens next.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Iron Reaver Soul Stealer.

But an excellent chapter, and I am definitly looking forward to more of your work.
person nmos
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good.
you have the character's personalities down so well.
it's also written very well.
good job!
person debEdoo
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy frikin shit. This fic is so amazing, that I keep reading it, over and over. I can't get enough of it. You're doing incredibly well for this being your first story. Kudos to you! Don't take so long to update next time!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ever so much for that website. really. I just about cried when I found out that they were not continuing the anime and I don't have any of the mangas, mainly because I dont have money and my family is prety thick headed about anything with manga's or anime. The site is amazing. Sure enough when I catch up to you I think I will understand your fic a little more. I like how you have portioned it out like the switch starting with Naraku first then to the gang then back to Naraku, I haven't seen that to much. Its cool. I like how it was in Miroku's perspective really that was different to me too but I like it. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck!