Wow! Am I glad I decided to check my favorite pairing category! Had to find the first part before I read this, but I am completely and utterly hooked on this fanfic. Please update again soon!
I'm gonna DIE if you don't update. :P
I'm really glad you're qriting again though! I checked for updates for literally years on this fic. Keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed reading this and the prequel. I did have some tears at some point without even realising when I read Naraku abuse. I was really hard and thank god not very explicit but you did show how she was in pain, hurt, humiliated and broken. I enjoyed reading Sessmoura as a caring character.
i like the fact that you are not rushing into the sexual mating between Rin and Sesshoumaru. It is more believable that way. I love the fact that she did not like been mated to him, did not want to be near him and she is now slowly accepting it and him. In so many stories once marked the female instantly fall for the demon and cannot resist him and his touch so hard. Even when they have been raped by say demon.
This stories ( prequel and this one) are unique and I could not stop myself from reading them all in 2 days. So well done.
kagura want of Sesshoumaru feels like he is a object. I really feel for Rin, to not be able to have children. How will she takes it when and if she finds out. She has suffered so much. Inu no taisho want so much a heir from Sesshoumaru. Why the urgency? I did laugh whenSesshoumaru told him to them ask Inuyasha for it. I guess it is a must for him. My heart broke at Sesshoumaru reaction to the news that Rin may be barren. I like the that you put a necklace like the one on the manga as a seal on Sesshoumaru if he ever try to hurt her. Nice one. I do wonder what his grand father's fang will do since he did not turn it into weapon.
Sesshoumaru is now trying to know her better and Rin is slowly appreciating his company? I like the fact that she is still innocent . It was sad when she looked at the wedding rings and i thought that she will never be loved.i hope Sesshoumaru will not just give her a wedding Rin without knowing what it really means. It will be funny if he does though. Finally they kissed and it was at the right moment, very sweet and not predictable at all. I really look forward to the next update and more chapter. You are a talented writer and tell your story very well. Not a single part was boring. I hope to read you soon.
Beautiful just beautiful!!! T^T
It's a good story. I love it!!! Continue more please!!
I am absolutely loving this story so far!!! I literally read your first part within a couple hours and was super happy to see that you made a sequel! I think the plot is without-a-doubt brilliant and the characters are fantastically laid out.. I am dying to see what happens next, especially between Rin and Sesshomaru...keep up the fantastic work! =D
So excited this is still going!!!