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person animegirl007
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!! Sesshoumaru is strong ...Sesshoumaru is mortal...He is my reason for living!!!! He must never die!!! He is to strong of a demon!!!!!

I'm very happy, he found Rin and protected her...Now it time to yell at Rin....RIN OPEN YOUR EYES GIRL!!! SESSHOUMARU IS NOT THE SAME DEMON YOU FIRST MET!!! HE IS DIFFERENT ...YOU MUST STOP FEARING HIM!!!!

I love your fast update...I should take a lesson from you!!! Keep it coming!!!!
person anhimals
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I feel so sad and bad for Sesshoumaru and Rin, especially Rin in this chapter. She had to go through torture of being violated by males again! They were sepearated again but this time by her choice. Rin needs to accept Sesshoumaru. I hope with him resucing her, she can see that he cares about her. Hopefully his injuires won't be so bad and he is still aloive. I hope the next chapter will be happier for them. Update soon!
person Anon.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, just when things were picking up! Good job; update soon!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Sesshoumaru!! How heroic he was and he got hurt. ;__; Nice to see Hiten getting his chest punched out with a hole tho, after what he did to that girl in the manga. ^^;;
person orvida
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow good for sessy coming to rins rescue and killing those 2 idiots for hurting rin in the first place.now on with the story.
person lorryka
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yey, un update. keep it up
person New Fan
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can just end it there!! There is more to thia story. Where is Sesshoumaru, where is Inuyasha!!??!! You must update really soon PLEASE!!!
person animegirl007
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god not again!!!!! Rin has been put though to much!!! I can't believe Sesshoumaru just let her leave!!! I feel her pain so much. Naraku and these bastards have been raping her, I more shocked that she not insane!!! INUYASHA WHERE ARE YOU?!?! BUT, MORE IMPORTANTLY.....SESSHOUMARU GET OFF YOU ASS AND GET TO RIN!!!! STOP YOUR PITY PARTY OF ONE AND MOVE IT!!!!! SAVE RIN!!!!

Fantastic as always...I can wait to see what you're going to write next!!!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! And oh no! The Thunder Brothers! Poor Rin.. I hope Sesshoumaru will save her. ;__;
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! What's gonna happen. I hope Sesshy comes and saves her. But what's Hiten getting out of the car. Ah I'm scared. See Rin this is why you shouldn't run away. Eeek. Hurry up and update I've gotta know what happens next!