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person Tao-ri-Sarra
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As I see it you have 2 very good options at them moment, though one of them I wouldn't touch with a hundred foot pole.

One- Let Sesshoumarru die and RIn sees his sacrifice and is able to trust more. (The option I dislike.)
Two-and this is my favorite scenario- Rin's accepted Sesshoumarru as a mate knowing that he cared enough to stop them and it drags Sesshoumarru back from the brink of death, knowing that if he dies, so will she.

I really enjoy this story, though I think it would be a bit cheating and unfair to string along these characters to a depressing death. I completely honor your right as an author to do it, though I will honestly be quite unhappy if you do, especially since Ive been reading this for 2-3 years now.

Anywho, update soon, and I'll review as well
person Fantasy Cat
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! A sequel!

It's been so long since I read the first story, I didnt think that you were ever gonna do a follow up.

Please keep going I cant wait for more!
person Sesshomaru will die??
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I check this story every single day for updates and I re-read it once a week. I'm moved by it, I love it. Sesshomaru is trying but isn't sure on what to do exactly. I am stunned by what is said, 'Soon he will die.' You're not going to kill him off are you? Please NO!! I hope Sess and Rin can come to some kind of agreement and that Rin can accept him more and see him as a friend first and then work their way towards being more. Rin hates him now for what he has done to her. Maybe as they are near each other her hate can grow to respect, then to like and eventually to love. Keep up the great writing! I LOVE LOVE this story.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How Evil!!! You can't leave it there! Ugh but you did! UGH!!!! Please don't let Sesshomaru die that would just be way too depressing. UPDATE SOON!!!
person bassment
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!
This is killing me!! ><
Please tell me you're going to update soon!!
I read both parts in one go; it was too exciting for me to stop ^^;; Seeing how Rin suffered was really hard!! >< I can't wait for the two of them to have a happy ending...
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWW come on another cliffy..... Im starting 2 think u dont luv me.... *CRIES*.... but i digress... This is a well written chapter, even if it wasnt as long as i like my chapters. But its an update so what right do i have to complain lol. It mad me kinda sad at the end, which means that u have to get out the next 1 soon so i can stop being sad! lol dont u love how my mind works?
person Irivel
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I cant wait for the next chapter! Please, keep writing this story. And Update soon, please!!!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Is sesshy gonna die?! Is this the end?! Hoping not! Cya laterz!!
person hieiashke
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well... I thought I could finally get off the cliff that I was hanging from, but then, I still find myself there... I humbly await the next chapter... there is one, right?
person Gryphaena
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is more! Huzzah! If only this chapter was longer.