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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I do think you left some parts out. Like did they mate? What happened to inuyasha after the battle? Then you had a few mild grammar problems. Mostly just doubled a word here and there. I think the ending was rushed. You could have described their life's a little better. Over all this was a great story. I do hope you think about writing a squeal.
~~Sieg
~~Sieg
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 - Good Chapter. Thanks for updated. Enjoyed it.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is GREAT
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really think that this story is pretty good.
It makes me wish this happened in the anime!!
Good work, I cn't wait until the next chapter..
It makes me wish this happened in the anime!!
Good work, I cn't wait until the next chapter..
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Very different! Please, keep up the good work. :)
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....for some reason, my heart was beating really, really fast when Inuyasha was about to hold his son. *thinks thoughtfully* I wonder if my bf will be like that when I have a baby...? Lol, that's not for a few years, though! Anyway, please keep up the great work, I really, really like this story
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! KAWAAIII!!!
Oh, funny line: "...No man would every experience this pain and for that, she was pissed." lol, classic. Ah, sigh...Men don't know how lucky they are, lol! j/k. I really love this story SOOOOO much and I'm glad Inuyasha could be there in time. Poor Sango though...She's scared of having a baby now, lol. I hope that passes. Poor Inuyasha as well! Oh, wow...But I'm so happy Isamu-Chan is safe! This is an awesome story and I hope you continue updates! Much love!
~Sho-Chan~
Oh, funny line: "...No man would every experience this pain and for that, she was pissed." lol, classic. Ah, sigh...Men don't know how lucky they are, lol! j/k. I really love this story SOOOOO much and I'm glad Inuyasha could be there in time. Poor Sango though...She's scared of having a baby now, lol. I hope that passes. Poor Inuyasha as well! Oh, wow...But I'm so happy Isamu-Chan is safe! This is an awesome story and I hope you continue updates! Much love!
~Sho-Chan~
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as always. Such a great story. I always look forward to new chapters!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU UPDATED! But YARG! It figures when Inuyasha finally gets there, Kagome is gone! Dammit girl, stay your ass in bed! Mama knows best! lol, but other than that, I really love this story! Keep up the great work!!!!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! Still a HUGE fan of this story! I was like, "WHOA! Everyone is in Kagome's time!" lol, keep up the great work
~Sho-Chan~
~Sho-Chan~