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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well chapter 2 did answer my question about elvira
knowing about inuyasha. does his brother and sister
know that inuyasha is really a demon? and will the
spell that's hiding his dog ears disappear when
inuyasha realises that he is a half demon? i ask
because i think his sister would like most women
go crazy over those adorable ears.
well, update soon. i'm dying to see the fight
between inuyasha and sesshomaru.
knowing about inuyasha. does his brother and sister
know that inuyasha is really a demon? and will the
spell that's hiding his dog ears disappear when
inuyasha realises that he is a half demon? i ask
because i think his sister would like most women
go crazy over those adorable ears.
well, update soon. i'm dying to see the fight
between inuyasha and sesshomaru.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was quite different, nice little touch of traditional fantasy. and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
It is unique and awe inspiring to say the least! Just one little complaint though Sess should have been his equal at least??? But I love the cliffy!!! Both Inu's brothers Love him what kind of triangle is that going to be??? DAMN!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE!!!!
It is unique and awe inspiring to say the least! Just one little complaint though Sess should have been his equal at least??? But I love the cliffy!!! Both Inu's brothers Love him what kind of triangle is that going to be??? DAMN!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE!!!!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor little sesshoumaru.
and here they were kicking ass and now he found his honey and he's gone.
bet it's fun when he finds him again, heh.
and here they were kicking ass and now he found his honey and he's gone.
bet it's fun when he finds him again, heh.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the concept of this story and how you were able to change the history that we usually hear concerning Inuyasha. Several people try to do this, but tend to fail. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very interesting though i am wondering
what time period they are in. i say that because
you mentioned inuyash putting on a polo shirt and
a trench. i am assuming you mean trench coat.
plus when inuyasha's mother was sending him away,
she called out elvira's name. so does she know
that inuyasha is izayoi's child and if so, why
hasn't she told him. or will she tell him when
she returns from her trip?
and also you made a few pronoun mistakes. some sentences
you were referring to izayoi as 'he' but other than those
two little minor complaints, this sounds to be a very
good story. i look forward to when sesshomaru and inuyasha
meet and what made him think sesshomaru was his enemy.
what time period they are in. i say that because
you mentioned inuyash putting on a polo shirt and
a trench. i am assuming you mean trench coat.
plus when inuyasha's mother was sending him away,
she called out elvira's name. so does she know
that inuyasha is izayoi's child and if so, why
hasn't she told him. or will she tell him when
she returns from her trip?
and also you made a few pronoun mistakes. some sentences
you were referring to izayoi as 'he' but other than those
two little minor complaints, this sounds to be a very
good story. i look forward to when sesshomaru and inuyasha
meet and what made him think sesshomaru was his enemy.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far, in chapter 1 you have set up the premise for the rest of the story. It's interesting. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I do hope this has a happy ending. I hate stories that don't. hehe.... DLS