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for I thought I lost you

by quittie

person KIKI441
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man! why did you have to end it there. i was so looking
forward to the fight between seeshomaru and philander. will
sesshomaru kill him. i hope so. i know that's a mean thing
to say and that its not his fault but i just can't help.

well, i guess lunar is happy now. a lot of elves as well
as demons will be killed because she will not give inuyasha
back to his family. i wonder what would happen if the elves
knew that inuyasha is in fact a demon? will they find out
the truth? will the dark elves arrive in the mist of
battle to help the demons. for their own purposes of course.

i can't wait until the next update.
person mamarita
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story- but I don't quite understand why InuYasha has absolutely no memory of Sesshomaru as his brother. Please update soon and make things more clear. Thanks.. DLS
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Luna is determined to keep Inuyasha from finding out he's a demon. I cant wait to read more.
person wolfluv
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Other then doing a spell check or maybe getting a beta to smooth your story out YOU'RE DOING SOME AWE INSPRIRING WRITING HERE!!!

QUESTION: is Sess and Inu going to be together eventually?? Will Sess have to fight Inu's other brother to be his intended???? MY MY MY MY what a triangle this is going to be!
person Vyper
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dang, can't tell if it is more an elf story or a inu story. It is cool, but different.
person wolfluv
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short or not you still update quickly and I enjoy even the smallest fragments of this story you are willing to share with us!! Espeicailly with work and school going on so any little snipit you wanna through out here please don't think we'll condem you at all!!


AGAIN THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE THIS STORY ROCKS!!!
person KIKI441
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tht's not fair. she should have let
him remembered. it's not rigiht to
hide something so important because
secrets never stay hidden for long. inuyasha
is going to be mad maybe not hate them but
he's going to mad they lied to him all
those years. so, will the dark elves come
to sesshomaru tlling him they will help him
to get his brother back.

and what is this? philander is inuyasha's
intended? really?

person KIKI441
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, i guess the secret is out. and the fight
was well done. now, i'm dying to see what will
happen next now that inuyasha is starting to
remember. will he go back to the west with
sesshomaru? because the west is half his and
in all actuality, the elven kingdom is not
his inhertance. but now i'm rambling. so, update!
person mamarita
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to reintroduce the two brothers. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update. DLS
person wolfluv
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story still rocks!!! Thank you for answering my question! Also THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICKLY!!! I look forward to the next chapter and all that follow!!!