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for Debt

by KeiChanz

person Anon
schedule December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yep I didn't
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT I REALLY WASN'T!!! KUDOS!! *claps*
person yasha3393
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg add another chapter!
person Cassie
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought it was Kagome and Inuyasha was trying to use her and couldn't have Kikyo..... OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I never would have thought it would be Sango. Is Kagome dead or gone back to her time or something like that. Please update add another chapter or something PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol I knew it...* does happy dance* O knew it..you did one of my things....I knew when you wouldnt say her name it couldnt be kagome and then i just matched likely eye color still ..good job...i enjoyed it ...*hides* even though i'm suppose to be updating myself right now *runs * Ja Ne'
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. It would be nice to know what the debt was and why the other person can't be with him.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I loved it, but it made me laugh more than anything. (Though I'm not saying it didn't do... Other things. :3)

It's too bad though, I actually had expected it to be that particular dark haired woman. But that's not a bad thing.

Also, I really need to finish my story for you. >> I'm... How do I put it..... Oh, incredibly lazy. I could have had it done that first day, if I tried, but instead it's been over a month and it's only like 15 pages long.