rate_review Reviews

I loved the matings although I kind of wish Sesshoumaru's was as rough as it was with Renji. Still so hot! Can't wait until the next chapter.

I love it! I love it!!!! SSOOOOO GGGOOOOODDDD!! LEMONNN~~~~ Great Job!

im going for C

Come on now you need to finish this

I am hoping you will update soon. I am looking forward to more. Just want you to know that I still love reading this story.

Awww man that was good! How could you leave us hanging like that? You gotta update now because I wanna know who that was standing there.

You tease.........we waited this long and dang it! Oh well......keep writing and we shall suffer and keep reading..............dang it.

The numerous spelling and grammatical errors are too annoying, so I will not finish reading the story.
The style needs refinement also.
Still at least you obviously put in a lot of effort.

I love this story.....so Mom Inu got involved too. That should make this game a lot more fun for the boys. I assume that is Yoh's family member to help with the tormenting of the elder brothers as well as their coniving Fathers. Please keep writing. This is great so far.

I love it!!! I would have never thought to make another couple pretty much identical to Sessh and Yasha in looks and personalities. This is great when the 2 sets of brothers get together the half-demons will have a best friend and confidant to tell all about their new mated life to. And hopfully you make the 2 hanayou pregnant, mmmmmm and they can maybe go through it together or roughly at the same time so their kids can play together (and you can forshadow that their kids will be mated in the future.) Can't wait...hope to see more soon. Keep up the great work.