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for Indelible

by yukisan

person Shinjuuki
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Hope to read more chaps very soon :D
person Mitsuki
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should totally make this an actual story rather than a one shot. There's so many ways to go with this story. :)
person MEA
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really need to continue this. It can't end there! Come onnn. :(

OK, well either way I loved it. You have a wonderful way with words.
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great story you should reallyy continue it.^.^
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHH! Juicy! Please Update soon!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was kinda sad does it have a sequel
person mamiko86
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such an incredible story that I wish you can continue it. It touched my heart. I just really want to know if they do ever meet up again or if they stay apart! Please write a continuation on this story!! I'm hooked!!
person ????
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
depressing
person Noacat
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with triple question mark. While certainly this story had a bittersweet ending, I don't think it was particularly depressing. Sometimes, I think unrequited love is far more beautiful and powerful than so-called "true" love. Sesshoumaru's decision in this story is painful, but speaks of a great devotion and real love for Kagome. He loves her, but he isn't willing to take advantage of her -- because he knows that what she feels isn't real. He respects her enough to let her go...

It's so hard, but ultimately the only choice he has, though I'd love a sequel where they get together and it's all happily ever after, I almost like it more this way. With the hard ending. Anyway. I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work!

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