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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

person Alpine02
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup, loved this chappy just as much as the others. I am on pins and needles waiting to see what is going to happen next. Can't wait to see another update..
Hugs
Alpine
person Inulovely383
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Let me begin first by saying I absolutely love this story and I wait anxiously for your updates. I love how you have kept Sesshoumaru in character and also how you are carefully bringing him closer to Kagome. Kagome is kept in character as well. In my opinion, she is becoming stronger instead of weaker because of Sesshoumaru. I can not wait to see what the gang does to Inuyasha for being with Kikyo instead of waiting for Kagome. He deserves to be beaten for his betrayal...which in this story is what you can call his abandonment of Kagome. He might as well dumped her at Naraku's doorstep, even if he was an unknowing and unwilling participant. Miroku, Sango and Shippou had an excuse they thought they were helping someone in need...something Kagome would have thought highly of them for doing. I wonder how Kagome is going to react when she Inuyasha after her escape (which I hope they do soon.) Now for a question...It may seem like Naraku is trying to get Kagome to sleep with him willingly in order to get her pregnant...however wouldn't he also accomplish what he wants if she sleep with Sesshoumaru willingly...I mean it would still be a powerful child...technically the child could still be absorbed even if it wasn't his own. Just a thought...I can not imagine Kagome wanting to bring Naraku's child into this world...willingly or otherwise...but Sesshoumaru's child that is another story. Again, great story and I'll be waiting with anticipation for your next update.
person Crysan
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! an update! I love this story and it just keeps getting better and better! update again soon!
person puppydog
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better! Keep going because I want to know what happens next!
person Kitty
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your kind of draging this story out a little to much other then that I really enjoy reading this story. ^_^
person Alpine02
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it.. Not sure that there are any words for how much I love reading this fic. Most fics I read with Kags/Sess are way ooc for Sess but this one is spot on and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for updating *-)
person Ladylara
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Sesshoumaru seems to feel a little protective over Kagome. Maybe between them they can find a way to escape. Cant wait for more.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off I would like to say that I have always wondered about the "ku ku ku" thing. Thank you for clearing it up. Second, I think that "DarkMystic" (not sure if I got that right) went a little overboard. I have noticed a few spelling errors, but I enjoy reading this story to much to stop for something so stupid. And third, you handled that reviewer flawlessly. Great job on everything! I will be looking for an update soon!!!!!!
person Carmille
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!

Sorry, but it is a really good chapter (15). The way our dear demon lords conflicted feelings/thoughts are delineated is simply glorious and I must say you have made dear kagome a srong fighter. She has a backbone hard as steel and that's someting I really appreciate.
The way this fiction is slowly developing make enough room for the two characters to get to know each other on a more deep and personal level. It isn't rushed like some writers prefer so you get a much more detailed knowledge about their background.
Just want to say I really like our writing.

Hugs,
Carlille
person Crysan
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know I think you are doing very well. I have only found a few mistakes and other authors also use kukuku when Naraku laughs. Also I will be bookmarking this story and checking frequently for the next update. I only do this with stories I REALLY like... If you ever get time please read my story DayDreams I have yet to go through and edit the beginning chapters to add details and I am only 2 chapters away from finishing but I would like your opinion on it as another author... keep up the good writing
A bien tot!