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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I hate cliffies! But, I am happy you updated. What took so long? I hope you don't take as long the next time. Update soon! And, keep up the good work!
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited I hope that a breakout is soon to come! I wonder what is coming next, this was a great chapter please update soon thank you for writing!
person Inulovely383
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The wait was definitely worth it...this was a fabulous update. I love the way you are slowly developing the closeness between Kags and Sess. I hope they escape soon...I do not think Sesshoumaru can take Kagome's beatings much longer and I really hope Kagome doesn't given to Naraku and let him take her innocence. That would be just so nasty...*shivers uncontrollably*...Anyway, Your story keeps getting better and better with each chapter, so keep up the great work. I look forward to reading your next update.
person kat_me
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“what the Hell is she doing?! Where the Hell is the new update!?!” Where the hell is MY next update? And... WHAT THE HELL, "Then one day everything changed..." WE ARE NOT AMUSED! One would think that after such a long absence you would have prepared a chapter of greater length and breath. I am disappointed in your work ethic and these shoddy productions you display are nothing more than shenanigans meant to amuse the unwashed masses! That having been said, keep up the good work!
person Ladylara
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could you just end there? What happened! I am loving this story and cant wait for more. Hope she hangs in there.
person Sesshy's Sweetheart
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, UPDAAAAAATE!!!! Plz? This story is so good and I can't wait until the next installment, keep up the good work.
person Kitty
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Come on give us more to read. PLEASE update REALLY REALLY soon.
person chhrisstinaa
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cooooool
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new update! Great suspense! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
person Netsubo
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you gonna put the next chapter up?!?