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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi angel,
its been so long since I reviewed this wonderful story and just read chapter 15 and oh my I have to say I just love and adore this story so much u have wonders with it, and sesshoumaru has come far from the first one. But he is sesshoumaru through and through and I love it. his portrayal and thoughts are so interesting, indepth and funny sometimes he is so well put together as a character in this story. I squeal with happiness. This chapter is by far one of my favs and the most important in their relationship factor. Brilliant.

Respect
Scarlet
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the story keeps getting better and better. amazing work so far.
person Foxfirek
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Now I really want to know there are so many posibilities. Does she give in? Do they escape? Does she do something to win sesshomaru's favor in some way? And then what. Cliffhangers are cruel! On another note this story as very exciting and it's great! Looking foreward to the next update.
person Dei
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn cliff hanger....

Dx

Oh, you are good...
person Carol
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...its gonna be so hard to wait for you to finish the rest of this story. >.< I'll try to be patient. You are a very talented writer. <3 I LOVE this story. It seems that few fics are built like yours- how the two build a relationship instead of suddenly being attracted to each other. Well done!
person evilpinatag
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh shit oh shit oh shiiit
she's going to find him holding her and then...she's going to eat a "special" flower that was in her food
that was placed by Naraku's guards in her food
and then make little hanyous with Sesshiles.
YEEE
Great chapter! I can't wait until the next update!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!! No come on!!! That has to be like the worst cliffy ever!! Please update soon so I don't go crazy!?
person Alpine02
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Silly cliffy.... Why do you taunt us so? Please continue... sooon....

Hugs
Alpine
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER! NO FAIR! I look forward to the update! ^_^ i always get a goofy smile on my face whenver i see that there's a new chapter out. Keep up the good work!
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Come On! A Cliffy! I really like this Sess/Kag story. There are some original ideas here that I haven't seen in another Sess/Kag story. I also like that so far Sesshomaru is not really OOC. Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!