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for Captured and Trapped

by StephanieG

schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is one of the hardest stories to wait for! I am just dieing to read the next one I hope you update very quickly!! Actually I pray that you go on ones of those writing modes where ideas just pour out on paper. But, I know as a painter that they just come and go and you can't rush those types of things...afterall I always tell my hubby that I can't just paint when ever you want me to I have to be in the mood or it won't be to it's full potential!
person CarpathianFemale
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really LOVE this story, you have captured me from the very first chapter, to which I cannot stop hitting the NEXT button to read more. I love the way its written, very enthralling! I hope to read more of your great story, Until your next update.

JA NE!
person sunset in love
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the plot is thickening!!! i really would like to read how the plot would play out, figuratively, when inuyasha has chosen to stick with kikyou regardless of the past history between the said ex-miko and kaggie, he had already thrown her life away in his ignorance. and i'd love to see just how kaggie would be released from Naraku's hell wif sesshy guarding her, preferably with the help of miroku, sango and kirara, only then kaggie will have the full back-up on the telling of her miserable experiences and the evil intentions behind it. I love Inuyasha, i really do, and i really hpe that both kaggie and inu would make up somehow, brother-sisterly way perhaps, it's not as if inu hated kaggie, in fact the opposite, it's just that he was too blinded by his love and fondness over kikyou, he really needs to learn that the current 'kikyou' is not the kikyou he used to know, he needs to know the truth to moved on... by the way, i understand that you must be a very busy person, but being a talented writer, i can't help but begging you to update the soonest possible, well, i'll keep on begging persistently at least until she was freed from the hell, i can;t take her being tortured for too long.... (big puppy eyes looking at while you are enjoying cup(s) of smoothies icecreamsssssss....)
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I am not sure who I am angrier with...actually no thats not true. I have always hated Kikyo and her backstabbing bitchiness but I am pissed with InuYasha for his blind faith in her. GRRRRR. Again, this was really well written and I can't wait to find out what happens next...

Hey wait. What happened to Sesshomaru?
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I had to re-read this fic. I had forgotten all about it. I hope the updating will be more frequent. I know you have a life but...I don't! I live for these fics! Okay, enough venting. This is awesome so far! I can so see Sesshy with Kags. Please update soon!!!
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not bad so far, but why aren't you using regular quotations? It's reading like they're all telepathic.
person maddie50
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love to hate Kikyou. It is great to see another chapter. Thanks.
person Miss.Undo
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it but can you please update sooner?
and i cant wait to see what happens with sesshomaru and kagome. ")
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! I have faithfully read this story (pulling almost an all nighter) and now it ennnnnds!!! I can't wait till you update... please? *puppy eyes*
And oh yeah, where's my lemon? XD toodaloo
person puppydog
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw come on! You don`t make another chapter for awhile and it`s short! But anyway it`s always been worth the wait so keep it up!